It really depends on the essay, the school, and - most importantly - your own unique story. It's critical to SHOW the adcom via stories & examples (vs. just telling them - you can't expect them to take your word for it) the impact you've had in your life and career so far & unique contribution you will bring to their school. You can see our essay analysis for all the top schools here:
https://admissionado.com/resources/essay-analysis/In addition to that, we work with our clients to develop a strategy about the unique value proposition they should convey in their application & how they will tell it.
If you're interested in seeing some sample essays from clients of ours who got in, you can reach out to Claudia at
[email protected] & she will be happy to help!