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14 Aug 2007, 07:26
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https://www.wsoctv.com/news/13882347/detail.html
"York County sheriff's deputies are looking for two men who couldn't decide whether or not to rob a convenience store, then finally went in and did it late Sunday."
"York County sheriff's deputies are looking for two men who couldn't decide whether or not to rob a convenience store, then finally went in and did it late Sunday."
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14 Aug 2007, 07:30
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lol spot the errors in yesterday's ny times.
Moreover, bankers and investors say, the strategies employed tend to be not only duplicable but broadly followed — the result being a packlike tendency that has helped increase market volatility and, for some hedge funds, has led to losses in the last month.
The managers of these funds are the products of the trading desks of the big investment banks, like Goldman Sachs and Morgan Stanley, both of which have investment operations that use computer models.
Moreover, bankers and investors say, the strategies employed tend to be not only duplicable but broadly followed — the result being a packlike tendency that has helped increase market volatility and, for some hedge funds, has led to losses in the last month.
The managers of these funds are the products of the trading desks of the big investment banks, like Goldman Sachs and Morgan Stanley, both of which have investment operations that use computer models.
14 Aug 2007, 07:40
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bmwhype2
1) Idiom: Not only, but also
2) hyphen can be replaced with a semicolon as they are 2 independent clauses
3) Being can be replaced with a simple verb, is
4) "like Goldman Sachs and Morgan Stanley" - this is getting picky, but the sentence could use a different comparative phrase like "such as"
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