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The club's display board was newly adorned with many long lost photographs of events gone by and albums, recalling stories of years past, and created enormous interest, with guests hovering around them, like bees around a honey pot.


A. and created enormous interest
B. and it created interest enormously
C. and creating enormous interest
D. and would create enormous interest
E. and it had created enormous interests



The club's display board was newly adorned with many long lost photographs of events gone by and albums, recalling stories of years past, and created enormous interest, with guests hovering around them, like bees around a honey pot.

two modifiers with +ing, photographs... recalling and created enormous interest, with guests hoovering

A
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I see where I went wrong now...:(
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Confusing one....

I would go with C. It sounds better.
Wat's the OA?
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display board ... adorned ... and created
I go with A
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To me it looks like ...recalling stories of the years past is modifying albums and to maintain ||ism we again need +ing form. so we need C here
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I think here the pronoun 'them' is referring to albums. So the clause which contains 'them' must parallel the earlier clause "recalling .. past". So C sounds the best to me. Whats the OA ?
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The club's display board was newly adorned with many long lost photographs of events gone by and albums, recalling stories of years past, and created enormous interest, with guests hovering around them, like bees around a honey pot.


A. and created enormous interest
B. and it created interest enormously
C. and creating enormous interest
D. and would create enormous interest
E. and it had created enormous interests


just gotta recognize the particpial phrases as intruding middlemen.


The club's display board was newly
adorned with many long lost photographs of events gone by and albums, recalling stories of years past,
and
created enormous interest, with guests hovering around them, like bees around a honey pot.

looks like 2 absolute phrases chained in the end? anyone care to elaborate?
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just gotta recognize the particpial phrases as intruding middlemen.

The club's display board was newly
adorned with many long lost photographs of events gone by and albums, recalling stories of years past,
and
created enormous interest, with guests hovering around them, like bees around a honey pot.

looks like 2 absolute phrases chained in the end? anyone care to elaborate?


Ok, I dont understand this. In this sentence recalling stories of years past, and created enormous interest are modifying "display board" right?

Why do we need a present participle for recalling and a past participle for created?

EDIT: I think I get it. adorned and created are modifying display board. recalling is modifying photographs or albums.



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