Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwelling in

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Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwelling in Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women,  whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house. 
(A)
(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography ,and their style is varying among women to houses.
(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography ,and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house. 
(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography ,and their style varies among women to houses.
(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography ,and their styles vary among women to houses.

Paul · Answer

I'd go with A
"whose" is necessary to refer to the Ndebele women. D and E are out.
I think B and C unnecessarily use relative pronoun "their" and "they" when A is much more concise in an appositive form

vraptor · Answer

(A)

(A)  whose murals  are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman  to  woman and house  to  house
(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is  varying among women and houses 
(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and  they  are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house
(D)  with murals  brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses
(E)  with murals  that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries

Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwelling in

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