I also chose D.Meaning: Healthy adults should not hesitate to consume eggs. Why? Since: 1. this food (an egg) contains: a) six grams of high-quality protein, b) all nine essential amino acids, and c) vitamins B12 and D, and 2. it (an egg) is a source of various other nutrients as well. Two reasons are provided by a nutrition consultant as the reasons why healthy adults should not hesitate to consume eggs and these two reasons are set off by the subordinator
since, i.e.
since X and
Y. X and Y, which are clauses, must be parallel. Secondly, the first clause, X, contains a list of three items. These three must also be expressed in parallel.
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A) According to one nutrition consultant, healthy adults should not hesitate to consume eggs, since this food contains six grams of high-quality protein, all nine essential amino acids, [and] vitamins B12 and D, and [it] is a source of various other nutrients as well.
and is missing from the list of three items in the first clause. We need
and between
all nine amino acids and
vitamins. In addition, the second clause is missing its subject,
it, with
it referring to
this food (an egg). Eliminate A for these errors.
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B) According to one nutrition consultant, healthy adults should not hesitate to consume eggs, since this food (an egg) contains six grams of high-quality protein, all nine essential amino acids, [and] vitamins B12 and D, and including various other nutrients as well.
Like A, B omits
and from the three items in list in the first clause. Secondly,
including various other nutrients, a participial phrase is not parallel to a clause. A clause with the pronoun
it referring to an egg is required. Eliminate B.
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C) According to one nutrition consultant, healthy adults should not hesitate to consume eggs, since this food (an egg) contains six grams of high-quality protein, all nine essential amino acids, [and] vitamins B12 and D, and various other nutrients are included as well.
Like A and B, C omits
and from the three items in list in the first clause. In addition, the second clause shifts from active to passive voice, focusing attention to the contents of an egg without. This is not optimum. In other to maintain parallelism, the active voice is required with the subject of the sentence referring to an egg or this egg, the subject of the previous clause. Eliminate C.
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D) According to one nutrition consultant, healthy adults should not hesitate to consume eggs, since this food(an egg) contains six grams of high-quality protein, all nine essential amino acids, and vitamins B12 and D, and it is a source of various other nutrients as well.
Everything is as expected. The items in the list in the first clause set off by since are expressed in a parallel structure. In addition, the second clause begins with it, which refers to this food or an egg. Everything is fine. Keep D.
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E) According to one nutrition consultant, healthy adults should not hesitate to consume eggs, since this food(an egg) contains six grams of high-quality protein, all nine essential amino acids, the vitamins B12 and D, and it provides various other nutrients as well.
The errors in A are mimicked in E. the only difference between A and E is the definite article that modifies vitamins. Eliminate E. I'm not sure if the definite article makes any difference, but maybe Sir
generis can elaborate on this in the OE.
D is left as the best answer.