abhishekmayank
Dwelling on the option C :
C. As well as Vitamin C and Vitamin A, a tomato contains a carotenoid called lycopene that is thought to help protect against diseases such as cancer and heart disease.
I understand that "as well as" can be used only for two items. But whether this syntax is wrong in which at one hand of "as well as" we have a list, having number of items with "and" conjunction, and on the other hand we have another item :
Vitamin C and Vitamin A as well as
lycopeneMoreover, what is parallelism issue over here as pointed out by Kaplan, which I quote again :
As well as Vitamin C and Vitamin A ”is not parallel to “a tomato”. No parallel marker exists, I think, for "tomato" and underlined part. So why are we looking for any parallelism?
Experts, could you help in it ?
AndrewNAjiteshArunHello,
abhishekmayank. I took the so-called parallelism issue to mean that the placement of
as well as Vitamin C and Vitamin A muddles the picture as to whether the vitamins are being held up as a parallel subject to
a tomato or whether they are contained, like lycopene, within the tomato. Since the answer choices have other non-GMAT™-like features, such as glaringly incorrect subject-verb agreement issues in
a tomato contain[i] and [i]tomatoes contains (the first of which I actually thought was a typo), the question, for all I knew, was testing the usage of
as well as versus
like. (There is a single answer choice that incorporates this construct, after all.) Consider:
1)
Like Vitamin C and Vitamin A, a tomato contains a carotenoid called lycopene... (Incorrect, since the meaning is altered.)
2)
A tomato contains a carotenoid called lycopene, as well as Vitamin C and Vitamin A... (The placement of the
as phrase clarifies what a tomato contains, but it interrupts the description of lycopene.)
I think the question is fine for the point it is aiming to make about the
correct sentence, but its articulation of the issues within the incorrect answer choices may be a little off-center.
I hope that helps. Thank you for bringing the question to my attention.
- Andrew