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The author claims that advertising the reduced price of selected grocery items in the Daily Gazette will help increase sales. The author asks us to consider the results of a study conducted last month in which two-third of 200 shoppers, half of whom had spent over $100 at the store, had read the ad and these shoppers had purchased one of the advertised products. Stated in this way, the argument manipulates facts and conveys a distorted view of the situation. The argument lacks the substance to prove that a promotional campaign to sell advertising space will be successful, or that promotion will entice prospective customers.
First, the author mentions that two-third of the 200 shoppers have acknowledged reading the ad, the author's understanding is that advertisement is responsible for bringing these customers to the store. However, the customer's acknowledgment may not mean that their presence is because of the ad. On the contrary, customers may be regular to the store and spend over $100 at the store. In addition, they may be regular readers of The Gazette also. Just because the shoppers are reading the newspaper and shopping the advertised store does not mean that one aspect may be the result of another one. It may also be that shopping at the store, customers picked up The Gazette and looked at the ad at the same time. In such a case, the store is inadvertently responsible for the sale of the newspaper. We would need answers to the additional question if sale prices mentioned in the newspaper brought the customer to the store, or will the regular advertisement in the newspaper will provide an incentive for shoppers to come to the store. Without concrete answers to such questions, it is seemingly difficult to conclude that advertisement is necessary.
Second, the author mentions that the clerk is tracking customers who purchased sale items. What if the sale items were regular basic necessity items such as milk. On one hand, there are high-demand items and on other hand, there are low-demand items. There is no mention of which category the sale item belongs to. Without this critical information, it is difficult to come to any conclusion.
In summary, the argument relies on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence. Hence, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.