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Although it is one of the food products that are most loved by children, yet ketchup, depending on brand, often contains chemical ingredients and a high amount of sugar.
A. Although it is one of the food products that are most loved by children, yet ketchup, depending on brand, often contains chemical ingredients and a high amount of sugar
B. Although it is one of the food products that are most loved by children, ketchup, depending on brand, often contains a high amount of sugar and chemical ingredients
C. Although it is one of the food products that is most loved by children, ketchup, depending on brand, often contains a high amount of sugar and chemical ingredients
D. Even though ketchup is one of the food products that are most loved by children, yet, depending on brand, it often contains a high amount of sugar and chemical ingredients
E. Ketchup is one of the food products that is most loved by children, yet it often contains a high amount of sugar and chemical ingredients, depending on brand
Official Explanation
(A) This answer choice is
stylistically flawed. Using both
Although and
yet, which are both opposition words, creates
Redundancy. The use of a Double conjunction is one of the specific redundancies that should always be corrected.
What helps us identify this Redundancy is the following
Stop Sign:
Though/Although/Even though/Despite/In spite of... later followed by but/yet/however/still/nevertheless(B) This answer choice corrects the
original Double Conjunction error by removing one of the
conjunctions (
yet).
(C) Although this answer choice corrects the original
Double Conjunction error by removing one of the
opposition conjunctions, it is
grammatically incorrect. The relative clause that is most loved by children describes the noun that appears immediately before it, namely, the food products. Since
the food products is plural, the verb that follows it also needs to be plural. However, is is singular.
(D) Same as A
(E) Although this answer choice corrects the original
Double Conjunction error by removing one of the conjunctions, it is
grammatically incorrect. The relative clause
that is most loved by children describes the noun that appears immediately before it, namely, the
food products. Since the
food products is plural, the verb that follows it also needs to be plural. However,
is is singular.
Answer: B