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# Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed,

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Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is necessary only in the South.

(A) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is
(B) widely distributed, measures to control the lesser cornstalk borer are
(C) widely distributed, lesser cornstalk borer control is
(D) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures to control it are
(E) it is widely distributed, control of the lesser cornstalk borer is
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Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is necessary only in the South.

(A) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is
There is no antecedent for them
(B) widely distributed, measures to control the lesser cornstalk borer are
wrong modifiers. " widely distributed" modifies "the lesser cornstalk borer".
(C) widely distributed, lesser cornstalk borer control is
Should be "lesser cornstalk borer 'S control" or " control OF lesser cornstalk borer "
(D) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures to control it are
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(E) it is widely distributed, control of the lesser cornstalk borer is[/quote]
"It" here is ambiguous.
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23 Apr 2012, 07:51
(A) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is
(B) widely distributed, measures to control the lesser cornstalk borer are -- Misplaced modifer
(C) widely distributed, lesser cornstalk borer control is
(D) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures to control it are
(E) it is widely distributed, control of the lesser cornstalk borer is
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Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is necessary only in the South.

(A) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is

Pronoun Error: The 'them' has a singular antecedent, 'lesser cornstalk borer'

(B) widely distributed, measures to control the lesser cornstalk borer are

Faulty modification: measures are not 'widely distributed'. The lesser cornstalk is.

(C) widely distributed, lesser cornstalk borer control is

Change in Meaning: Here a noun phrase is introduced, 'lesser cornstalk borer control.'

(D) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures to control it are

The Answer: Clear antecedent, proper modification

(E) it is widely distributed, control of the lesser cornstalk borer is

Faulty Modification: It is not the control that is 'widely distributed.'
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09 May 2012, 13:37
Hi ChrisLele

Can you please explain what is modifying what in this sentence. Measures is modifying the whole clause?
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10 May 2012, 07:08
Pavan, what is widely distributed? Its the lesser cornstalk borer.

Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is necessary only in the South.

(A) Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is necessary only in the South.- Only a singular antecedent is available, hence wrong
(B) Although widely distributed, measures to control the lesser cornstalk borer are necessary only in the South. Here the highlighted portion says, the measures to control is highly distributed. This alters the intent. Its the Lesser Cornstalk borer that is highly distributed
(C) Although widely distributed, lesser cornstalk borer control is necessary only in the South. Once again as B, this says lesser cornstalk borer control is widely distributed.
(D) Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures to control it are necessary only in the South.
(E) Although it is widely distributed, control of the lesser cornstalk borer is necessary only in the South. - Same modifier issues.
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10 May 2012, 09:50
@pavanpuneet,

In some of the incorrect answer choices there is faulty modification. In the correct answer, those errors in modification are omitted. For instance if we take answer choice (B), ...although widely distributed, the measures..., the measures, which comes directly after the comma, is being modified by the preceding phrase.

The correct answer (D) eliminates this error by making it clear in the subordinating clause that the borer is widely distributed, although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures... Unlike answer choice (B), 'measures' that comes after the comma is not being modified by anything in the preceding phrase. The reason is that preceding phrase already has a subject (the borer), that is clearly linked with 'widely distributed.'

Hope that helps remove any confusion .
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04 Jun 2012, 00:25
monir6000 wrote:
Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is necessary only in the South.

(A) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is
(B) widely distributed, measures to control the lesser cornstalk borer are
(C) widely distributed, lesser cornstalk borer control is
(D) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures to control it are
(E) it is widely distributed, control of the lesser cornstalk borer is

i pick D. in A, them has no clear referent. in B and C there is a fragment. in E, the referent of pronoun it is ambiguous.
correct me if i am wrong
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04 Jun 2012, 00:27
monir6000 wrote:
Although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is necessary only in the South.

(A) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, control of them is
(B) widely distributed, measures to control the lesser cornstalk borer are
(C) widely distributed, lesser cornstalk borer control is
(D) the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures to control it are
(E) it is widely distributed, control of the lesser cornstalk borer is

i pick D. there is a fragment in B and C. in A, the pronoun them has no clear referent. in E the referent of pronoun E is ambiguous. please correct me if i am wrong
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08 Jun 2012, 16:21
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@pavanpuneet,

In some of the incorrect answer choices there is faulty modification. In the correct answer, those errors in modification are omitted. For instance if we take answer choice (B), ...although widely distributed, the measures..., the measures, which comes directly after the comma, is being modified by the preceding phrase.

The correct answer (D) eliminates this error by making it clear in the subordinating clause that the borer is widely distributed, although the lesser cornstalk borer is widely distributed, measures... Unlike answer choice (B), 'measures' that comes after the comma is not being modified by anything in the preceding phrase. The reason is that preceding phrase already has a subject (the borer), that is clearly linked with 'widely distributed.'

Hope that helps remove any confusion .

Thanks Chris, this helped clear up things for me. I understand why the correct answer is correct and why my answer is incorrect.
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