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B is my choice.

The rest break the rules of parallelism.
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Kpadma,

You're actually wrong when you say:

"A, B --> X, Y, and Z persist, while A remains demanding. << not parallel "

X, Y and Z are collectively plural so they need a plural verb = persist. A is singular and needs a singular verb = remains.
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"A, B --> X, Y, and Z persist, while A remains demanding. << not parallel "

X, Y and Z are collectively plural so they need a plural verb = persist. A is singular and needs a singular verb = remains.


Yes, The answer could be B.

There no subject-verb disagreement in this question!

"A, B --> X, Y, and Z persist, while A remains demanding.

I mistook "demanding" for a verb. Here, the verb is "remains" and
"demanding" is an adjective.

Therefore, in a simplified form, the sentence should read as follows.

X, Y, and Z all persist, while A remains

Where "persist" and "remains" are parallel.

Good Point Ndidi :good
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but B definitely lacks parallellism though....Then how can it be correct???moreover there is a lack of continuation just before all persist....
Rajbhai time for the answer....
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"A, B --> X, Y, and Z persist, while A remains demanding. << not parallel "

X, Y and Z are collectively plural so they need a plural verb = persist. A is singular and needs a singular verb = remains.

Yes, The answer could be B.

There no subject-verb disagreement in this question!

"A, B --> X, Y, and Z persist, while A remains demanding.

I mistook "demanding" for a verb. Here, the verb is "remains" and
"demanding" is an adjective.

Therefore, in a simplified form, the sentence should read as follows.

X, Y, and Z all persist, while A remains

Where "persist" and "remains" are parallel.

Good Point Ndidi :good


Please read your answers again. Let us say we have
A, B --> W, X, Y and Z all persist, while A remains

So, per answer B we will have
W, X and Y and Z all persist, while A remains

Don't you think this is a lil awkward ?

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B =

"b) the segregation of jobs by gender, lower pay for women as a group, and jobs that require relatively low levels of skill and offer women little opportunity for advancement all persist, while women's household labor remains demanding. "

Explanation:
the W (the segregation of jobs by gender), X (lower pay for women as a group), and Y (jobs that require relatively low levels of skill and offer women little opportunity for advancement) all persist, while Z (women's household labor) remains demanding.
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hmmm . . . . Points to ponder :?

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My answer is choice B
According to me C is incomplete with
Quote:
persisting while women's household labor remains demanding...

D & E has 'not to mention' and 'as well as', which is not required.Between A & B, I have a doubt..
Can we have a sentence in which there is a coma before and like in
b) the segregation of jobs by gender, lower pay for women as a group, and jobs that require relatively low levels of skill and offer women little opportunity for advancement all persist, while women's household labor remains demanding.
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If yes then the answer should be B
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I think it is [E]

the segregation of jobs by gender, the lower pay for women as a group, the jobs that require low levels of skill with little opportunity for advancement all persist, as well as women's household labor remains demanding.

2 reasons:
1. Maintains parallel form "the"
2. Follows a series, ex:- S in T, U in V, W in X and /(as also) Y in z
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a) the segregation of jobs by gender, lower pay for women as a group, jobs that require relatively low levels of skill and offer women little opportunity for advancement all persist, while women's household labor remains demanding.


A cant be correct, unless there is the conjunction, and, between lower pay and jobs.



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