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You can find the pie chart attached.
The pie chart illustrates the similarities between different energy production from the years 1995 & 2005.
Overall, from the years 1995 until 2005 gas and coal made the majority, followed by petrol while nuclear and other forms contributed the least to the energy production.
Furthermore, the chart demonstrates a slight rise in the production of coal & gas from 1995 until 2005, 1.13% and 0.68% increase, respectively. In addition, the production of nuclear and other forms of energy, between 1995 and 2005, show a more significant rise, exactly 3.70% and 4.20% increase, respectively.In comparison, petrol showed a significant decrease of exactly 9.72% from 1995 until 2005.
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