MunchenCalling
Excellent work Brown.
You dont care to elaborate your extracurriculars?
College:
2-year executive member of the largest fraternity on campus
captain of intramural basketball team for 4 years
3 year captain of ACM programming competition team
Was pretty involved with the computer science department, helped reform the curriculum at my uni, was sent to australia for a conference on the topic
Since college:
Captain of local men's league basketball team
Habitat for humanity
Member of a program sponsored by my company where we work with high school students and teach them how to make video games
Member of a mandarin language learning group
Took classes at local community college for mandarin
I think my work performance was my stronger point. I work at one of the three largest software companies, and was instrumental in launching a new product group. The process included working nights and weekends to build prototypes for demos to the company's top dogs. This led to a bunch of awards that make my resume look nice.