SramanSanyal
Please explain the meaning of the correct option
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SramanSanyal. I would be happy to offer my thoughts on this question in an effort to help you and the larger community.
Gmatprep998
As part of the government’s ongoing green initiative, only 850 trees have been translocated, the latest conservation method – less than those translocated by private bodies.
A. method – less than those
With
countable items, the comparison should be
fewer than. If there is some vague, uncountable amount of something instead, as in,
less than the amount of water in the Pacific Ocean (since no one is actually measuring anything), then
less than is appropriate. This is an easy choice to eliminate.
Gmatprep998
B. method- fewer than have been
The comparison marker has been fixed, and the present perfect
have been is perfectly parallel with the same usage earlier in the sentence. It cannot get any more parallel than to repeat
have been translocated. There are no issues here, so this is a fine answer.
Gmatprep998
C. method, which is less than those
You have to be careful with
which clauses. The
which clause typically refers back to the noun closest to it across the comma, which in the sentence at hand is
method. It would not make sense to read the sentence as,
the method is less than [the number of trees] translocated by private bodies, but the grammar suggests it. Moreover,
less than has reared its ugly head once again, so this one is definitely out.
Gmatprep998
D. method, a number lower than the trees
Not only does
fewer in (B) convey the same vital meaning in one word instead of three, but the correct answer also makes it clear that numbers are being compared to numbers, while this answer seems on the surface to be comparing
a number to
trees, rather than to the
number of trees. Finally, there is a noticeable lack of parallelism between
850 trees have been translocated from earlier in the sentence and
the trees translocated that the tail-end of the underlined portion here creates. Taken as a whole, there is too much working against this one for it to be an optimal choice.
Gmatprep998
E. method, fewer than the ones
Gosh, I want
the ones to be
those instead. Even then, though, I would look to maintain the parallel construct that
850 trees have been translocated establishes. If
translocated acts as a verb in the first instance but as a modifier in the second, then that skews the comparison somewhat. You have to go by what is on the screen to assess an answer choice, not by what you want to be there. This option loses out, plain and simple.
I hope that helps. If there are any lingering questions or concerns, I would be happy to carry on this dialogue. Good luck with your studies.
- Andrew