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At a discussion panel on the making of Secrets and Lies, British director Mike Leigh stated that by involving actors in the creative process, beginning with the conception of the piece, through research, discussion, improvisation,
rewrites, and rehearsals, he aims to depict real life.
A. rewrites, and rehearsals, he aims to depict real life
B. rewriting, and rehearsing, he aims to depict real life
C. which by rewriting and rehearsing he aimed to depict real life
D. rehearsals, and rewrites, his aim is to depict life realistically
E. rehearsals, and rewrites, he aimed to depict life realistically
OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
At a discussion panel on the making of Secrets and Lies, British director Mike Leigh stated that by involving actors in the creative process, beginning with the conception of the piece, through research, discussion, improvisation, rewrites, and rehearsals, he aims to depict real life. A. rewrites, and rehearsals, he aims to depict real life
Incorrect.
This answer choice is grammatically incorrect. In Reported Speech, when the reporting verb is in the Past tense (stated), the following conjugated verbs should also be in the Past. However, aims is in the Present.
What helps you identify this question as a Reported Speech question as well as identify the mistake is the following Stop Sign:
Reported Speech with a reporting verb in a Past tense
B. rewriting, and rehearsing, he aims to depict real life
Incorrect.
This answer choice repeats the Reported Speech mistake in the original question. In Reported Speech, when the reporting verb is in the Past tense (stated), the following conjugated verbs should also be in the Past. However, aims is in the Present.
In addition, Verb+ing forms (rewriting and rehearsing) can be used as noun replacements only when there are no actual nouns. Since there are real nouns - rewrites and rehearsals - they should be used instead.C. which by rewriting and rehearsing he aimed to depict real life
Incorrect.
While this answer choice appears to correct the Reported Speech mistake in the original question, by changing aims in the Present to aimed in the Past, it is grammatically incorrect.
The corrected sentence is a run-on sentence and also a fragment. By adding the words which by after improvisation, the corrected sentence adds a second relative clause to the original sentence, without completing the first clause with a conjugated verb.
In the corrected sentence the verb aimed belongs to the second relative clause only.
Finally, before the which you have a list of three items but notice that now, the sentence does not fit as you have a list of three items and there is no 'and' before the last item improvisation.D. rehearsals, and rewrites, his aim is to depict life realistically
Incorrect.
This answer choice repeats the Reported Speech mistake in the original question. In Reported Speech, when the reporting verb is in the Past tense (stated), the following conjugated verbs should also be in the Past. However, is is in the Present.
What helps you identify this question as a Reported Speech question as well as identify the mistake is the following Stop Sign:
Reported Speech with a reporting verb in a Past tense
E. rehearsals, and rewrites, he aimed to depict life realistically
This answer choice corrects the Reported Speech mistake in the original question, by changing aims in the Present to aimed in the Past.
What helps you identify this question as a Reported Speech question as well as identify the mistake is the following Stop Sign:
Reported Speech with a reporting verb in a Past tense