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“Corporations should look to the city of Helois when seeking new business oppurtunities or a new
location . Even in the recent recession , Helois ‘s unemployment rate was lower than the regional average .It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share
of the regions manufacturing jobs. In addition , Helois is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research development of innovative techonologies.”


While this argument has some validity in theory, however it lacks key information that would assist
In identifying if the reasoning is truly valid. The author fails to explain the corporations should look to the city of Helois as a new location for their new business opportunities . some correlation is missing, between the city of helois’s lower unemployment rate and attracting companies of research and development.

The first flaw in authuor’s argument of corporations in choosing city of Helois for their new business expansions due to its lower unemployment rate in the recent recession period. Employment plays one of the major role in industries and they considered to be main part in running industries . The lower unemployment rate says that no more chance for big number of employees not available for the new industries . Manufacturing Industries like clothing ,food processing . house hold things industries needs more employees at work . The author’s argument proven flaw due to lack of employees city Helois is not ready for industrial expansion.

The second flaw states in the argument, Helois city became the center of the region in increasing manufacturing jobs. It didn’t provide the information the role played by the city in creating jobs . There
Is no clues of the sector they are manufacturing products , for manufacturing they need raw materials .
For clothing the raw material needed cotton , food processing they needed acres of fields , there are different kinds of raw material needed for the different manufacturing products . The flow of raw material shows the success of the manufacturing industries . Helois is not the place where all kinds of raw material available it should depend on other places around it.


Since it lacks certain supportive factors like Helios is looking forward in expansion in economic base in attracting companies research and development of innovative technologies . Helois has a good history
In providing jobs in manufacturing sector. For manufacturing sectors industries, employees,
Electricity , factories, etc ….been required where as the research and development they needed well qualified Persons to improve and work on technologies . The argument declining to clarify the resources
Required for research development technology innovatives.

The assumptions of the arguments author is not based on sound reasoning ,correlation of the assumptions nowhere to be found. Lower unemployment rate shows us the sluggishness Of the city Helois industrial expansion . The statements of the argument which supports the idea of out spread of research development and tecchonology innovatives to the city Helois.
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New post 21 Sep 2018, 11:32
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The logic is good, but maybe review some material on sentence structure or familiarize yourself with English papers. I noticed many idiomatic errors.
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