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By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East

(B) only one eastern state

(C) in the East there was only one state

(D) in the East only one state did

(E) only one in the East had

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By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.

(A) only one in the East - this is vague

(B) only one eastern state

(C) in the East there was only one state

(D) in the East only one state did

(E) only one in the East had -- Addition of had gives a clear picture that " only one is East had developed a railroad system " removes the vague structure in Option A .
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By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East - no verb.

(B) only one eastern state - no verb.

(C) in the East there was only one state - no verb

(D) in the East only one state did - Did is not parallel to had.

(E) only one in the East had- Correct. Parallel to had.

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By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East - no verb.

(B) only one eastern state - no verb.

(C) in the East there was only one state - no verb

(D) in the East only one state did - Correct. Did can replace the verb.

(E) only one in the East had- had cannot replace a verb.

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Regarding option A
Why we can't apply ellipse

A) only one in the East (had developed railroad system)

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+1 for E.

(A) only one in the East --> No verb

(B) only one eastern state --> No verb

(C) in the East there was only one state --> Wordy and not concise

(D) in the East only one state did --> Paralell error "A had, B did"

(E) only one in the East had --> Correct, rectifies Paralell error "A had, B had"

Hence, E.
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souvonik2k wrote:
By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East - no verb.

(B) only one eastern state - no verb.

(C) in the East there was only one state - no verb

(D) in the East only one state did - Correct. Did can replace the verb.

(E) only one in the East had- had cannot replace a verb.

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Regarding option A
Why we can't apply ellipse

A) only one in the East (had developed railroad system)

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Hi sumit411
We can apply ellipses if there is no ambiguity.
Here, if we omit ''had developed railroad system'' its not clear what the ''only one in the East'' does.
So we need a verb after that.
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sumit411 wrote:
souvonik2k wrote:
By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East - no verb.

(B) only one eastern state - no verb.

(C) in the East there was only one state - no verb

(D) in the East only one state did - Correct. Did can replace the verb.

(E) only one in the East had- had cannot replace a verb.

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Hey Souvonik,

Regarding option A
Why we can't apply ellipse

A) only one in the East (had developed railroad system)

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Hi sumit411
We can apply ellipses if there is no ambiguity.
Here, if we omit ''had developed railroad system'' its not clear what the ''only one in the East'' does.
So we need a verb after that.
Sorry for asking you again but I think I am still not very clear with this.

As far as I know, we repeat a verb if their is any ambiguity. If their is only one possible interpration possible, we don't need to repeat the verb.

Eg: I like pizza more than my wife
( 2 possible interpretation--> I like pizza more than my wife likes pizza OR I like pizza more than I like my wife - - - - > both makes sense)

In this case, repeating a verb will make sense to clear up the ambiguity.

Eg2) John cooks better pizza than his wife
( only one interpretation possible that makes sense - - - > John cooks better pizza than his wife cooks---> other interpretation does not make sense - - - > John cooks better pizza than he cooks his wife (Holy ****))

In example 2, we can repeat the verb. That won't be wrong but the sentence is fine without a verb. So ultimately option A and E comes upto style

Is style tested in GMAT?

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By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East - no verb.

(B) only one eastern state - no verb.

(C) in the East there was only one state - no verb

(D) in the East only one state did - Correct. Did can replace the verb.

(E) only one in the East had- had cannot replace a verb.

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I got this wrong. 'had' can replace a verb and maintains parallelism here.
Answer E.
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By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East

(B) only one eastern state

(C) in the East there was only one state

(D) in the East only one state did

(E) only one in the East had (developed)


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Ans : E
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sumit411 wrote:
Sorry for asking you again but I think I am still not very clear with this.

As far as I know, we repeat a verb if their is any ambiguity. If their is only one possible interpration possible, we don't need to repeat the verb.

Eg: I like pizza more than my wife
( 2 possible interpretation--> I like pizza more than my wife likes pizza OR I like pizza more than I like my wife - - - - > both makes sense)

In this case, repeating a verb will make sense to clear up the ambiguity.

Eg2) John cooks better pizza than his wife
( only one interpretation possible that makes sense - - - > John cooks better pizza than his wife cooks---> other interpretation does not make sense - - - > John cooks better pizza than he cooks his wife (Holy ****))

In example 2, we can repeat the verb. That won't be wrong but the sentence is fine without a verb. So ultimately option A and E comes upto style

Is style tested in GMAT?

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Hi sumit411,

Happy to help :-)

You are correct that there are some cases where we do not have to repeat the verb. However, we can only do that if the meaning is absolutely clear. Looking at choice A:

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By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


Here, the meaning is not clear -- there are two interpretations, just as in your first example. We don't know what "one" refers to -- is it referring to a state or a railroad system? Without the verb "had", we don't know. So there is a fundamental ambiguity here, which is incorrect on the GMAT -- it's not just a question of style. Once we add "had", then we can see that "one had" is in parallel with "states had developed", clarifying that "one Eastern European state had developed a railroad system".

I hope that helps :-)
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sumit411 wrote:
Sorry for asking you again but I think I am still not very clear with this.

As far as I know, we repeat a verb if their is any ambiguity. If their is only one possible interpration possible, we don't need to repeat the verb.

Eg: I like pizza more than my wife
( 2 possible interpretation--> I like pizza more than my wife likes pizza OR I like pizza more than I like my wife - - - - > both makes sense)

In this case, repeating a verb will make sense to clear up the ambiguity.

Eg2) John cooks better pizza than his wife
( only one interpretation possible that makes sense - - - > John cooks better pizza than his wife cooks---> other interpretation does not make sense - - - > John cooks better pizza than he cooks his wife (Holy ****))

In example 2, we can repeat the verb. That won't be wrong but the sentence is fine without a verb. So ultimately option A and E comes upto style

Is style tested in GMAT?

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Hi sumit411,

Happy to help :-)

You are correct that there are some cases where we do not have to repeat the verb. However, we can only do that if the meaning is absolutely clear. Looking at choice A:

Quote:
By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


Here, the meaning is not clear -- there are two interpretations, just as in your first example. We don't know what "one" refers to -- is it referring to a state or a railroad system? Without the verb "had", we don't know. So there is a fundamental ambiguity here, which is incorrect on the GMAT -- it's not just a question of style. Once we add "had", then we can see that "one had" is in parallel with "states had developed", clarifying that "one Eastern European state had developed a railroad system".

I hope that helps :-)
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Hi Carolyn,

This certainly helps. Spot on as always.

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Bunuel wrote:
By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East

(B) only one eastern state

(C) in the East there was only one state

(D) in the East only one state did

(E) only one in the East had


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This question has to do with parallel structure. You have to have a continuity of verb tenses and structures. Because you say ‘five x had’, then you have to follow it by saying, ‘but only one y had’. The only two choices that even have a verb in them are D and E. Choice D uses a different verb tense, the simple past. Choice E is the correct answer.
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Bunuel wrote:
By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but only one in the East.


(A) only one in the East - Verb Missing

(B) only one eastern state - Verb Missing

(C) in the East there was only one state - No parallelism

(D) in the East only one state did - Had is not parallel to did

(E) only one in the East had
Perfect Parallelism - Five of Western European States had.......Only one in the East had
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