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Circumnavigating the Earth in just nine days, Voyager entered the record books in 1986, becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop.
(A) Circumnavigating the Earth in just nine days, Voyager entered the record books in 1986, becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop.
(B) The 1986 circumnavigation in just nine days by Voyager entered the record books, becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop.
(C) Entering the record books by becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop, Voyager circumnavigated the Earth in 1986; it took only nine days.
(D) Voyager became the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop; it circumnavigated the earth in just nine days in 1986 and entering the record books.
(E) Circumnavigating the Earth in just nine days, Voyager became the first aircraft to circle the globe; it enters the record books in 1986.
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Circumnavigating the Earth in just nine days, Voyager entered the record books in 1986, becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop.
(A) Circumnavigating the Earth in just nine days, Voyager entered the record books in 1986, becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop. (B) The 1986 circumnavigation in just nine days by Voyager entered the record books, becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop. (C) Entering the record books by becoming the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop, Voyager circumnavigated the Earth in 1986; it took only nine days. (D) Voyager became the first aircraft to circle the globe nonstop; it circumnavigated the earth in just nine days in 1986 and entering the record books. (E) Circumnavigating the Earth in just nine days, Voyager became the first aircraft to circle the globe; it enters the record books in 1986.
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Consider the logic here: Voyager entered the record book for being the first aircraft to circle the globe. Thus, becoming the ...... should be the fact happened before Voyager entered the record book.
B is wrong because " becoming" must be of the noun Voyager, not the circumnavigation.
C is wrong also because of illogical order of facts.
in D : as it uses "and" the verb "enter" must be "entered" instead of "entering" to maintain the parallelism.
I'm left with E.
*NOTE : a semicolon can also be used to separate closely related independent clauses, for example:
My grandmother seldom goes to bed this early; she's afraid she'll miss out on something.
I think the modifier is wrong in B. becoming refers to circumnavigation
In D, Think it should be entered instead of entering.
My first guess was A but I think the second modifier is wrong.
Should it not be became instead of becoming
BINGO! Macca got it first. I can`t keep my eyes open any longer, gotta get some sleep before I start to hallucinate :madd
CORRECT ANSWER: C
YOUR LATEST ANSWER: E
Explanation:
Spot the Error:
The descriptive phrase indicates the modifier is being tested. The sentence contains 2 descriptive phrases (circumnavigating the Earth and becoming the ...nonstop) both of which modify Voyager.
Rule and Fix:
A Modifier must be as close as possible to the thing it describes. Currently, the first phrase is correctly placed but the second is not.
POE:
A and B both place a modifying phrase incorrectly.
Chunk and Compare:
Compare C to D.
D creates a list instead of presenting the two events separately as does C. The list however is unbalanced since it uses "circumnavigated" and "entering". Eliminate D.
Compare C to E.
E uses the present tense "enters" which contradicts with the past tense verb "became." Eliminate E.
Reread your choice:
Choose C
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