Score: 645 GMAT Focus
GPA: 3.6
Pre-MBA industry: Finance
Post-MBA industry: Consulting
1 year ago
30 Dec 2023 11:12
Nationality: Indian
Age: 29
Education:
Bachelor’s in Commerce(Hons.) from a Top 10 college (Grade: 90%)
MBA (Finance) from NMIMS, Mumbai (college is amongst Top 20) (GPA 3.6/4)
Academically I have excelled throughout (school and college)- with multiple awards, scholarships and consistently in Deans List (top 10 percentile).
GMAT Focus: 645 (Sectional score: Q 83, V 83, DI 79) - equivalent to -700 in GMAT Classic
Work Experience: 5 years (6 years by the start of MBA)
Current Role: Associate at Bank of America (approx. 3.5 yrs)
I am currently working as an Associate in Enterprise Credit. In my present role I am responsible for Underwriting, structuring & documentation of complex transactions for our Indian clients. I work on projection models and perform sensitivity analysis to assess credit risk of the companies. I currently manage multiple blue chip clients ranging from industries such as Technology, Healthcare, Telecommunications, Retail etc.
I was recently promoted from Analyst to Associate for consistent and exceptional work and have been awarded with few awards for excellent client service and stakeholder management.
I had interned with Bank of America as a part of Summer Internship in my MBA and was awarded a Pre-Placement Offer (PPO) for outstanding performance (amongst 4 out of 25 interns who interned).
My previous role (prior to MBA): Associate at Ernst & Young (approx. 1 yr)
In this role I evaluated client background, performed assurance specific procedures and ensured various regulatory compliances. Coordinated with teams based out of France & Luxembourg and successfully evaluated client control systems.
Extracurriculars:
-Won multiple awards/medals in sports and Dance in school (both inter/intra competitions)
-Winner and Runner up in various case study competitions in college
-Leadership Role: Head, Entrepreneurship cell in College
-Organised multiple events/competitions in Annual Commerce fest in college
I had volunteered at an NGO, in which i created video lessons and online study modules aimed to help underprivileged children get access to basic education, which continues to be accessed by thousands of government school children till date.
Post MBA Goal:
Work in a Consulting/Financial consulting role for MBB and get well versed in the nuances of Business.
Preferred Geography for School - USA (T10-T15)
Given this will be my second MBA, i only want to target the Top 15 US schools. As per my current score and my profile, i want to understand which schools would i have a realistic chance at, as I am also from somewhat overrepresented category.
I feel your biggest challenge to overcome would be providing strong enough reasons for the second MBA. What would give you that you don’t already have? This is the question to answer for both personal success and admission.
Your GMAT is on the lower side. These schools are averaging around 730 on the classic test which is closer to 675…
Agreed with bb's point on justifying the second MBA. Having a strong narrative would be important i.e. showcasing your skills/ experiences, post-MBA goals and what you hope to gain through the MBA (i.e. beyond the geography difference) that would enable the transition.
Regards,
Arvind
Founder, admitStreet
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Your GMAT score is on the lower side for most UST15 programs. Another reason could be (though I haven't read your application/ essays) the lack of a strong narrative covering your motivation for a second MBA, career goals, etc. If I were to guess, it'd likely be the GMAT score.
I would suggest a retake (or switching to GRE) if you're looking at UST15. Alternatively, if you've hit a plateau with the score, looking at UST15-30 and EU/ UK programs would be prudent.
Feel free to reach out for a deeper chat.
Regards,
Arvind Kumar (Founder, admitStreet)
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Clearly, you need to revisit your strategic choices to decide where do you wish to play and how will you win (am using MBA / consulting language already:-)).
- Dee
MBA admissions consultant and Management Consultant
catalysts.success@gmail.com
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Shantanu Sharma
Founder and Admissions Consultant, MBA and Beyond
Email: valuecreation@mbaandbeyond.com
You applied to excellent MBA programs and I am sorry for the results. With your work experience, I don't see the reason for so many dings and I will pin down the possible reasons to:
1. a sub-par GMAT score. With this GMAT score, you already put yourself at a disadvantage. All your target MBAs have class averages hovering around 728-730, and you were clearly below that. So first and foremost, retake GMAT.
2. You must re-evaluate if your applications were strong enough. For applicants vying for a second MBA, b-schools would really want to assess the validity of your career goals, the need for an MBA and if you will benefit from it. Sometimes applicants are not able to convey this convincingly (experienced this last year while helping a reapplicant who applied to Kellogg for a second MBA. In his first attempt, his story was all over the place making him sound incredulous. Once he fixed this with our help in his reapplication, he got admission).
Other than the goals essay, the rest of your application would also need to be really strong while conveying strengths like leadership, collaboration, maturity, a purpose and strategic mindset in life, and the ability to contribute while at b-school.
3. I see that you lack ECAs after your college, so that could be another area to improve on, but if you are applying R1 this year, then focus on GMAT first.
If it helps you, I'd be willing to look at one of your applications and identify any gaps.
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