Hey, @BLMBA

For a more effective MBA application, concentrate on expressing your unique story and professional goals. With a GPA of 3.4 and a 159 EA, you have the necessary academic background to help you transition from corporate banking to investment banking. In relation to this change, you must mention particular experiences that made it possible like particular projects or roles that show your analytic abilities and understanding of finances. Moreover, at work, make much about your leadership roles in recruitment and networking; as well as what they have contributed to your professional development in terms of skills and relations with other people.

Furthermore, the voluntary work done in the church shows how committed one is to community service while maintaining a balance between personal life and professional career. The point of these essays is to portray an enthusiasm for finance and how all the resources of each program, such as industry connections or experiential learning opportunities, will facilitate your move up the career ladder. By linking all of these factors together, you can create an appealing storyline that both admission committees would understand.



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For more context

Asian American Male



UG:

Top 50 Public School, Majored In Business Analytics & Information Technology

Work Experience (Same firm, European Bulge Bracket)

2019-2021 Graduate Operations Rotation Program (Rotated in Virtual Channels Development Strategy and Financial Crime Operations)
2021-2024 Corporate Banking Team (2 Years as Analyst, 1 Year as Associate).
-Staffer for three Analysts- delegated workloads from our Team's Directors and Responsible for handling each Analyst workload and double checking work before sending back up
- Rated Top Bucket for 2/3 Years on the team

Work ECs
-Heavily involved in recruitment and interview process since I joined my firm in 2019. Traveled back to my school to host networking events, as well as take phone calls/coffee chats with numerous prospective interns and graduates. Most recently, I was involved in a committee that met together to discuss best ways of restructuring the analyst experience and making sure new hires were receiving the necessary support. I also was part of a committee that helped conduct first round interviews for Summer Interns and discussing in a roundtable format on best candidates and who we should submit for Superday Interviews.
-Involved in Fund Raising competition in 2019/2020 that was sponsored by bank (Micro-Tyco Enterprises) Came up with innovative ways such as bake sales to raise $5,000 for the 2019 Australian Wildfires and for Impoverish Woman

Other ECs
-Played Electric, Acoustic, and Bass guitar for my Hometown Church's Worship Team for 2 years, leading congregation of ~300 members in Worship on a bi-weekly basis.
-Currently Serve on Welcoming Team for NYC Church; help with weekly logistics and conducting outreach for new members and potential members

College ECs/Experience
-went to Taiwan for 2.5 Weeks to teach English to College Juniors and Seniors during my Freshman Summer Year. I taught through materials I prepared, informal conversations, and games/activities.
-Part of our Supply Chain Club in College for 2 years. Was in Board Spots for both Years; one as Marketing Director and one as Treasurer of the Club
-Involved in Fellowship on Campus for 4 years. Led Praise, Small Groups, and was part of Large Group Team
-Mentor in Business Club for Freshman when I was a Junior; weekly meet ups and check ins regarding business classes and general career

Goals:

Transition from Corporate Banking to Technology Investment Banking. Long term would likely be to work my way up to CFO at a Tech Startup.

Would love to hear insights on anything else I should strengthen. Thanks!

Hi BLMBA
I am Priyanka, Clent Manager at ARINGO. Speaking about your profile, your profile looks good on the surface particularly your work experience in a European bulge bracket bank and your involvement in recruitment and leadership roles. Columbia and Stern greatly value applicants who exhibit leadership, analytical skills, and a global perspective. Your ECs, such as leading the worship team and volunteering at the church, showcases your ability to collaborate, lead, and give back to the community (Social impact is indeed a plus point).

However, to really stand out in the competitive pool of applicants, consider quantifying your achievements in corporate banking. For instance, how did your work as a staffer impact the team's efficiency or revenue? Additionally, given your target of technology investment banking, gaining exposure to the tech industry through projects or networking would significantly strengthen your application. Demonstrating a deep interest in the intersection of finance and technology will be very crucial.

To get a better sense of your chances, we should chat more about your work experience, what you're passionate about, and your long-term goals. Please connect with us or share your CV so we can assess your profile comprehensively.
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You can also email me your CV at: priyankak@aringo.com
Good Luck!

Hey, BLMBA


Adding when writing your essays, highlight your passion for technology and desire to become the CFO of a technology start-up eventually. Expand your profile even more by enrolling in extra-related courses that show you are dedicated to constant learning, thus enhancing your numerical skills. Mention instances of tech/innovation projects in corporate banking.

Specify accomplishments in work experience and extracurricular involvements. Take up more positions with leadership responsibility. Involve yourself in finance and tech-focused organizations outside of class. Continue community service while seeking opportunities aligned with career goals.

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