Score: 695 GMAT Focus
GPA: 4.0
Pre-MBA industry: Other
Post-MBA industry: Media/Entertainment
3 months ago
10 Aug 2025 07:08
Background:
- 25 years old (F); Asian ethnicity, but the first person in my family to grow up outside of my parent's home country
- Started college at a different university on a Division 1 athletic scholarship before being forced to quit due to health issues
- Later transferred to another school, getting a Bachelors and Masters in Analytics with a 4.0 GPA; graduated top of my class in Masters (large state university)
- Joined my current company (Fortune 300) right after college as a Data Analyst and got promoted to Senior Analyst within two years
- Leading ad-hoc analysis and project work to support company growth within Merchandising. I work directly with Product Managers, with some of my work going up the the Executive VP level. I also work with one of our international teams to migrate legacy reporting into newer programs. Currently managing two analysts and I have managed an intern the last two summers
Extras:
- Have been taking martial arts classes for over two years now
- Volunteer at my local library
- Have been nominated for and completed the Dale Carnegie Course, will be starting a 3-month leadership program run by the city I work in designed for high-achieving young professionals
GMAT:
- 695 GMAT Focus (Q87 / V85 / D82)
- 3-4 months of prep while working full-time. Most of my mock exams were 635-645 before getting a 695 on the actual exam
- I considered retaking for a higher score, but decided it wouldn't be worth the added effort and stress for a higher percentile score
MBA Goals:
- Currently working in a primarily brick and mortar retail company. They specialize in certain types of products, but they are industry leaders
- Post-MBA: Pivot to Media/Entertainment or Sports, ideally in analytics but open to other avenues
I plan on mostly applying in Round 1, and I will be getting a recommendation from my direct supervisor. Given this info, what would I need to work on to improve my profile?
However, your GMAT Focus 695 is just fine for Harvard and LBS, though workable for Columbia and Stern if your essays and recommendations are exceptional. The bigger challenge is the pivot into media/entertainment. Without direct exposure to this industry, you will need to show transferable skills, networks, and ideally side projects or volunteer work in this space.
Your story should also address the early athletic scholarship and health setback, as this shows resilience. Strengthen your extracurricular profile beyond martial arts and volunteering with something that connects directly to your post-MBA vision.
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Your profile is strong and well-rounded, especially with a 695 GMAT Focus, a perfect 4.0 GPA in analytics, and clear leadership managing analysts and cross-functional projects. Your work at a Fortune 300 company with exposure to senior executives and international collaboration adds significant credibility. The athletic scholarship background and ongoing martial arts practice demonstrate discipline and resilience, while volunteering and leadership programs show commitment to personal growth. To improve, focus on clearly articulating your pivot story to Media/Entertainment or Sports in your essays — why now, how your analytics skills transfer, relevant experiences/projects and your passion for the industry. Strengthen your narrative around leadership impact and influence beyond direct reports. If possible, seek opportunities for high-visibility projects or cross-industry exposure before applying. Your recommendation from your supervisor will add strong credibility. Overall, your profile is competitive for R1 applications at top programs.
To maximize your chances, consider applying to a balanced mix of reach, target, and safety schools.
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Columbia, Stern, and Anderson can see a good fit given your quantitative + creative aspirations. Harvard can like the upward trajectory and resilience, but it’s a very competitive pool, so narrative strength is key. LBS will value the international perspective and analytics expertise.
You’ll have ~3 years by matriculation, which is on the lighter side for some programs. Early-career candidates must clearly show leadership impact and maturity. A 695 GMAT Focus is good, but might not be a knockout score for HBS.
Even though you already manage analysts, make it metrics-driven: “Managed X analysts delivering Y projects, cost savings/ efficiency gain.”
“Led cross-functional initiative with product + international teams > reduced reporting transition time by X%.”
Clarify the Media/Entertainment pivot/, adcoms need to see- Why are you making this change? How do your current skills (analytics + stakeholder management) transfer to that space? Why now (industry trends, personal readiness)? How the MBA fills the gap (network + creative industry immersion). (e.g., sports business analytics).
Can you show commitment to the pivot? by online courses or a side project: Data visualization/reporting on sports/media trends, even self-initiated, can be portfolio material, or any media/entertainment analytics conference experience, panels, or online courses. Networking & school research are important. By the time you apply, have 2-3 specific touchpoints per school. Conversations with current students/alumni in your target industry. Participation in online events, club events, or school webinars.
We would love to learn more about your professional experience and personal journey so we can offer a more tailored assessment of your profile and evaluate your chances at your target schools more accurately. If you'd like, feel free to book a profile evaluation session.
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Founder and Admissions Consultant, MBA and Beyond
Looking at your profile rather surgically, some important points come up:
Your Work Experience of 3 years is on the lower end; Harvard, LBS, Columbia, Stern, Anderson, Tepper all value experiences around ~5 years). To combat that shortfall, your application should focus on framing your career till date as high-impact, high-velocity growth in a short time.
While your ethnicity of Asian/ Indian is overrepresented, but your growing-up in the U.S. will help you be counted in the domestic pool for U.S. schools i.e. competition is less intense than that for international Asian applicants.
Gender: Female — Advantage for diversity at all schools.
GMAT Focus: 695 is below average for M7 schools, though closer to average for Tepper; UCLA typically awards scholarships for higher scores. If you can therefore, get a higher score.
Your GPA of 4.0 is Excellent and provides strong academic credibility. It is however, important to note that your explanation of your quitting college 1, and your GPAs of the other years will matter.
Pre-MBA Industry: "Other" — Will need clarity; unusual industry can be a plus if framed as unique AND if the lessons learn there can be shown as transferable to your post MBA goal
Post-MBA Industry: Media/Entertainment — Will become critical for you to show why MBA + why now, and to show if an MBA will really benefit you in your targeted role
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