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Delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year, it was decided by the company manager to give her staff a raise.
(A) it was decided by the company manager to give her staff a raise
(B) the decision of the company manager was to give her staff a raise
(C) the company manager decided to give her staff a raise
(D) the staff was given a raise by the company manager
(E) a raise was given to the staff by the company manager
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving the question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that the company manager was delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year and decided to give her staff a raise.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers• In a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun; this is one of the most frequently tested concepts on GMAT sentence correction.
A:1/ This answer choice incorrectly uses "Delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year" to modify the placeholder pronoun "it", leading to an incoherent meaning; the intended meaning is that the company manager was delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year and decided to give her staff a raise; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
B:1/ This answer choice incorrectly uses "Delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year" to modify "the decision of the company manager", illogically implying that the company manager's
decision was delighted; the intended meaning is that
the company manager herself was delighted; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
C: Correct.1/ This answer choice correctly uses "Delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year" to modify "the company manager", conveying the intended meaning - that
the company manager herself was delighted.
D:1/ This answer choice incorrectly uses "Delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year" to modify "the staff", incorrectly implying that the company manager's
staff was delighted; the intended meaning is that
the company manager herself was delighted; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
E:1/ This answer choice incorrectly uses "Delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year" to modify "a raise", illogically implying that the
raise given by the company manager was delighted; the intended meaning is that
the company manager herself was delighted; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
Hence, C is the best answer choice.To understand the concept of "Phrase Comma Subject" and "Subject Comma Phrase" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):
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