OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPT
Quote:
Democrats’ views, which favor progressive taxation and a liberal philosophy, are generally deemed more revolutionary than Republicans’.
• COMPARISONS and possessives
We must compare similar things.
We should be comparing the views of Democrats with the views of Republicans.
Possessives can be confusing because we are not required to restate the noun under comparison.
→
Correct: The girls' grades were better than the boys' [grades].
For brevity's sake, we do not repeat the bracketed word
grades.
If we want to be extremely formal or if using the possessive creates confusion, we can use "those of" (or that of).
→
Correct: The girls grades were better than those of the boys.
"Those" = grades
(And remember that to show possession, we use
either "grades of Dmytro"
or "Dmytro's grades" but not both at the same time, i.e.,
not grades of Dmytro's.)
THE OPTIONS Quote:
A) are generally deemed more revolutionary than Republicans’.
• The sentence correctly compares Democrats’ views to Republicans’ views
• I do not see any other errors
KEEP A
Quote:
B) are generally deemed more revolutionary than Republican.
• Grammatical, but the meaning is silly.
The sentence is grammatical, but it does not compare the views of Democrats with the views of Republicans.
• Wrong meaning. The sentence means that
Democrats' views are usually more revolutionary than those views are Republican.Democrats' views are not capital-R Republican.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) are generally deemed the most revolutionary over Republicans’.
• comparisons between two groups require the comparative
more, not
most. The superlative
most requires at least three groups.
• the word "over" is at best unidiomatic and at worse nonsensical.
→ We do not say that something is
deemed more or most X "OVER" something else.
Such phrasing is neither idiomatic nor comprehensible: the words
most (or more) and
over should not be linked in a comparison.
→ Nor should the words
deem and
over be linked in a comparison.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) are generally deemed more revolutionary in comparison to those of Republicans.
• more ____ requires the word
than: The Dems' views rare more XYZ
than the Republicans' views.
• almost always, do not use both a comparative word such as
more and some form of the word
comparison.
→ the phrasing
more ... in comparison to is redundant.
More already implies comparison.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) are generally deemed more revolutionary than Republicans.
• the comparison is not parallel because
Republicans is missing an apostrophe at the end
→ Democrats' views are not being compared to Republicans' views.
• this sentence means: the Democrats' views are more revolutionary than the Democrats' views are Rebublicans.
Views are not Republicans. Republicans are
people who belong to a political party.
ELIMINATE E
The best answer is A.
Noteswarrior1991 , you wrote:
Quote:
i think Republicans' is also same as Republicans
I am not sure that I understand what you are asking.
Republicans' with an apostrophe at the end of the word means "Republicans'
views." We don't have to repeat "views."
Republicans without an apostrophe at the end of the word means
people who identify or are registered with the Republican political party.
See my analysis below about the word Republicans'.
I suspect that the
plural possessive is confusing (and it is confusing!).
Examples teach better than words. Words in brackets are
not written.
→
Correct, singular:
The Indian's math training was deemed more thorough than the American's [math training].→
Wrong, singular:
The Indian's math training was deemed more thorough than the American. (Now the Indian's math training is more thorough than the American person is thorough. Ridiculous. We cannot compare the Indian person's math training with an American person.)
→
Correct, plural:
The Indians' math training was deemed more thorough than the Americans' [math training].→
Wrong, plural:
The Indians' math training was deemed more thorough than the Americans.The Indians' math training was more thorough than the American people were thorough? No.
This stuff can start to get confusing when proper plural possessive nouns are involved.
→ A
Republican is a person who belongs to the Republican party in the U.S.
→
Republicans are a group of people in a political party in the U.S.
→ The word
Republicans' is an adjective that is about to describe something that Republicans possess: Republicans' philosophy; Republicans' minority status in the House of Representatives; Republicans' right-wing tendencies.
The word
Republicans' cannot stand on its own as a subject and in order to be "shorthand" for something, the "something" must already have been mentioned (e.g.
views)—Republicans' is an adjective, not a
noun.Nouns are italicized:
→ I know a
Republican; he lives down the street.
→ I know many
Republicans; they were vocal neoconservatives at HLS.
→ I do not respect Republicans'
silence about other Republicans'
violent statements directed at Dr. Fauci, Kris Krebs, and even other Republicans who are just doing their jobs as election workers. Someone is going to get hurt.
I hope that analysis helps.
COMMENTSjessiemjx , welcome to SC Butler.
These answers are very good. Kudos to all.