jedit
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Dear friends,
Does GMAt Sentence Correction questions include the misuse of Commas, colon, and semi-colon ? Cause I have been doing some GMAT exercises through the network, and find one website providing such questions, although it doesnt seem to be exist in my Kaplan book!
Please advise.
Can you cite an example so it becomes clear what exactly you are trying to clarify.
Dear Jedit,
see the following example:
His collection of World War II memorabilia was one of the largest in the town, he had been collecting these items for many years.
Possible Answers:
one of the largest in the town he had been collecting these items for many years.
one of the largest in the town; he had been collecting these items for many years.
one of the largest in the town he had been collecting these items for: many years.
one of the largest in the town, he had been collecting these items for: many years.
one of the largest in the town, he had been collecting these items for many years.
Correct answer:
one of the largest in the town; he had been collecting these items for many years.
Explanation:
This sentence misuses a comma. This sentence combines two independent clauses without the use of a conjunction. The necessary punctuation for this spot is a semicolon, which should appear after the word "town." No additional punctuation is needed. The correct choice is, "one of the largest in the town; he had been collecting these items for many years."
does such example come on the real test ?
Thanks