Essay
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05 Sep 2011, 02:56
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Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
In present age one of the most important issues is how to bring up your child well. This matter concerns literate parents very much as they will do everything in their power to raise their child become a good member of society. In my opinion, both school and family are responsible for their children’s behavior.
As a rule, befor the age of going to school parents should focus on their child all by themselves. This is the most important step in his/her life, because in this age it would be much easier for parents to teach their child how to behave well in society. On the school time, the responsibility is still on their shoulder , so by keeping in touch with school they will be always aware of their acting in the small society called “ school”.
Doubtless, controlling children in the 8 hours which they spend the school is teacher’s duty. Teaching essential and positive things that children should observe in order to be a good member is the most important matter teachers should be concern about ; in addition, avoiding them from doing things that can harm the society and themselves will be much helpful. Contacting with parents is necessary , owing to get useful information and being familiar with children’s behavior.
As a conclusion , both parents and school in charge of bring up a children as good member of society by looking after and taking care of them.