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Every year, because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed annually.


A. Every year, because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed annually

B. Because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed every year

C. Every year, because the horn of either the black and white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed

D. Every year, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed annually because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market

E. Annually, because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, a hundred African rhinoceros are killed




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Every year, because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed annually.


A. Every year, because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed annually

Incorrect.

Using both every year and annually is redundant since they mean the same thing.



B. Because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed every year

Using both every year and annually is redundant since they mean the same thing. This answer choice corrects the Redundancy by removing the word annually.


C. Every year, because the horn of either the black and white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed

Incorrect.

Although this answer choice corrects the original Redundancy by eliminating the redundant word annually, it makes a Parallelism error. Either must be followed by or, not and.

What helps you identify this question as a Parallelism question as well as identify the mistake is the following Stop Sign:

    (n)either... (n)or...



D. Every year, hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed annually because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market

Incorrect.

This answer choice repeats the original mistake. Using both every year and annually is redundant since they mean the same thing.



E. Annually, because the horn of either the black or white species can fetch a large sum on the illegal market, a hundred African rhinoceros are killed

Not exactly.

Although this answer choice corrects the original Redundancy, it changes the meaning of the original sentence. The original sentence states that hundreds of African rhinoceros are killed whereas this sentence states only a hundred.








In option B the sentence starts with subordinating conjunction (because) and I have read in one of the articles to avoid starting of a sentence with subordinating conjunction. Whereas option E removes that doubt but again it changes the quantity so I am confused what to give more weightage when something like this comes up.
Can you please give your opinion on this.
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