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How one supposed to know the intended meaning of the sentence if the original sentence is correct in grammer . Option B changes the meaning in my opinion . Experts please help .
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Just wonder why do we need past participle in option B,which reads :

Mother Theresa, focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, founded the Missionaries of Charities and won the Nobel Peace Prize.

Isn't Mother Theresa the doer of the action " focus on"?

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I considered A correct choice as I am assuming that winning the Nobel prize is the result of the previous clause.

Winning the Nobel prize can be the result of founding that organization.

I still don't think that choice A is incorrect. Please help !

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I considered A correct choice as I am assuming that winning the Nobel prize is the result of the previous clause.

Winning the Nobel prize can be the result of founding that organization.

I still don't think that choice A is incorrect. Please help !


Your logic is valid. I do not see any problem with option A either.

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in the answer B , there is no main verb. all are modifiers so it should be wrong.

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(A) Focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, Mother Theresa founded the Missionaries of Charities, winning the Nobel Peace Prize


(B) Mother Theresa, focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, founded the Missionaries of Charities and won the Nobel Peace Prize

© Mother Theresa focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, founded the Missionaries of Charities, winning the Nobel Peace Prize



(D) Mother Theresa founded the Missionaries of Charities, focusing on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, winning the Noble Peace Prize

(E) Founding the Missionaries of Charities, and focusing on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, Mother Theresa won the Nobel Peace Prize
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in the answer B , there is no main verb. all are modifiers so it should be wrong.


We do have a main verb in B.
(B) Mother Theresa, focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, founded the Missionaries of Charities and won the Nobel Peace Prize

Those marked in red are verb modifiers and those marked in blue are the verbs, joined together via a conjuction "and".
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Just wonder why do we need past participle in option B,which reads :

Mother Theresa, focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, founded the Missionaries of Charities and won the Nobel Peace Prize.

Isn't Mother Theresa the doer of the action " focus on"?


No, , focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, tells how she founded the Missionaries of Charities.
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i have a doubt regarding option B , it seems like it follows parallelism and mother teresa did there things but does it make sense and can you explain why one should prefer B over A , to me A is more concise ? i could be wrong , help.. :!:

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i have a doubt regarding option B , it seems like it follows parallelism and mother teresa did there things but does it make sense and can you explain why one should prefer B over A , to me A is more concise ? i could be wrong , help.. :!:


Notice the sentence between two commas in A. If we remove "Mother Theresa founded the Missionaries of Charities", the sentence will not make sense. The sentence will become something like

Focused on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata winning the Nobel Peace Prize.

But when you do so in B, you will get a meaningful answer.

Remember, as per GMAT rules, if we remove a sentence/phrase between two commas, the sentence MUST makes sense.

Thus, B is preferred over A.
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OA is B


Hi Daag Sir,

I guess meaning wise A is fine because the intended meaning (what I think) is that Foundation of Missionaries of Charity is the reason for Mother Teresa to win the Nobel Prize. Please let me know if I am missing anything.

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OA is B


Hi Daag Sir,

I guess meaning wise A is fine because the intended meaning (what I think) is that Foundation of Missionaries of Charity is the reason for Mother Teresa to win the Nobel Prize. Please let me know if I am missing anything.


Dear arunavamunshi1988,

Please see my explanation here for why B is preferred over A.

https://gmatclub.com/forum/focused-on-t ... l#p1817195
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(E) Founding the Missionaries of Charities, and focusing on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, Mother Theresa won the Nobel Peace Prize

I think that in option E, the comma before and focusing is wrong because we join only two identities: Founding the Missionaries of Charities and focusing on the orphans deserted..., so we don't need comma before conjuntion and. We use comma before conjuntion and only for list that contains three or more items.

Is my above reasoning right?

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(E) Founding the Missionaries of Charities, and focusing on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, Mother Theresa won the Nobel Peace Prize

I think that in option E, the comma before and focusing is wrong because we join only two identities: Founding the Missionaries of Charities and focusing on the orphans deserted..., so we don't need a comma before conjunction and. We use a comma before conjunction and only for a list that contains more than two items.

Is my above reasoning right?

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You are correct. The comma before 'and' focusing is unnecessary. We use the comma when we have more than two items in a list and when two ICs are joined by fanboys.
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(E) Founding the Missionaries of Charities, and focusing on the orphans deserted by their parents and dropped along the gutters of the city of Kolkata, Mother Theresa won the Nobel Peace Prize

I think that in option E, the comma before and focusing is wrong because we join only two identities: Founding the Missionaries of Charities and focusing on the orphans deserted..., so we don't need a comma before conjunction and. We use a comma before conjunction and only for a list that contains more than two items.

Is my above reasoning right?

Many thanks!

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You are correct. The comma before 'and' focusing is unnecessary. We use the comma when we have more than two items in a list and when two ICs are joined by fanboys.


Many thanks for chacking my reasoning daagh :)
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I considered A correct choice as I am assuming that winning the Nobel prize is the result of the previous clause.

Winning the Nobel prize can be the result of founding that organization.

I still don't think that choice A is incorrect. Please help !


Your logic is valid. I do not see any problem with option A either.


even I have the same logic and reasoning and I have seen in many books and video that we should always go with original sentence meaning

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i can not find difference between options A and E. i chose E it has sequence of events. what is OA.

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I marked A as well as winning can be consequence of founding. B makes these two parallel.
Not sure why A is wrong.

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Comma before focused seems to mean that Mother Theresa is being focused on the orphans, whereas, it would be Mother Theresa focused on the orphans.

So, doesn't 'B' change the meaning?
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