OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Quote:
Fossil discoveries suggest that an extinct river turtle survived the meteorite, which killed off dinosaurs 65 million years ago.
A) meteorite, which killed off dinosaurs 65 million years ago
B) meteorite that had killed off dinosaurs 65 million years ago
C) meteorite that killed off dinosaurs 65 million years ago
D) meteorite, which had killed off dinosaurs 65 million years ago
E) meteorite killing off dinosaurs 65 million years ago
• Split #1: that v. whichThe information
that killed off dinosaurs 65 million years ago is essential to understanding and identifying the meteorite.
Accordingly, the sentence must use
that, not
which, and omit the comma.
Options A and D use COMMA + WHICH and should use THAT + no comma.
Eliminate A and D
• Split #2: verb tense - past perfect is not warranted hereWe use the past perfect to describe one event that happened before the others.
Past perfect is often called the "past of the past."
The events in this sentence are not appropriate for past perfect.
Past perfect would require this sequence:
|dinosaurs died] → [meteorite] → [turtles survive]
Options B and D use past perfect (had + verbED) illogically.
The turtle survived
the meteorite—
the very same meteorite that simultaneously killed the dinosaurs.
ELIMINATE B (D is already eliminated)
• Split #3 - "killing" is incorrectIn option E, the gerund
killing should be changed into a
that clause,
that killed.
→ we want to say that the river turtle survived the very meteorite
that killed the dinosaurs.
→ we do not want to say that the river turtle
was surviving the meteorite that was killing the dinosaurs.
→ we have a fait accompli. "Killing" does not convey that fact.
The correct answer is CCOMMENTS yashikaaggarwal and
AntrikshR , your posts are thoughtful. And helpful.
Nice work.