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Hello, guys!
This is my first post on gmatclub! (Excited!)
Last two months I have been searching through the whole forum and got my first draft of CV done with tips and advice found here. So, the first thing coming to my mind upon my completion is to post it here, since I know everyone here is super nice and professional!

Currently I am a senior college student in China, and plan to apply for a B-school in Europe, Nova sbe hopefully, so, really hope I can get some help here. Appreciate every comment! (Anything about Nova sbe is more than welcome!)


Educational Background
Bachelor: Northwest University (211), Xi’an City, P.R. China
Major in International Economics and Trade
• Overall GPA: 3.46/4(Top 15%), Major GPA: 3.5/4, 85.45/100 On Average
Exchange student: FoGuang University, Yilan County, Taiwan
Major in Finance and Applied Economics
• Overall GPA: 3.96/4(Top 5%), Major GPA: 3.95/4, 92.29/100 On Average

Honors & Scholarships
• National Motivational Scholarship (Three Times)
• 2nd Academic scholarship of Northwest University (Two Times)
• 3rd Academic Scholarship of Northwest University
• 2nd Prize in the National English Competition for College Students
• National Volunteer Certificate of Social Investigation in New Rural Area of China

Professional Experience
HNA Modern Logistics Group, Xi’an City
Summer Intern, Eco-Innovation Department (12 weeks)
• Proposed and drafted the Business Plan “Eco-Box” with my mentor, which was selected as an Incubation
Project by the Innovation Committee.
• Analyzed 6 logistic enterprises’ profit models, and launched 6 project reports accordingly.
• Participated in the design of Innovative management system actively by utilizing knowledge of Management,
International Business and Distribution Economics.
China Construction Bank, Leping City
Summer Intern, Consultant (7 weeks)
• Received proficient training and thus strengthened understanding of financial products and markets.
• Collected and organized news about economics and finance on a daily basis.
• Translated 10+ promotion announcements, resulting in high praise from the Director of Bank Consultant.

Academic Project
“Internet Plus” National Project: An Investigation and Exploitation of Source Reduction System of Illegal
Water Discharge & Gas Emission (3rd Prize)
• Initiated a research group of 7 to investigate the status quo of local Pollutant Discharge Enterprises.
• Created and compiled the Operation System and Profit Mode for a sustainable commercialization of this
Source Reduction System using Input-Output tables and Feasibility Analysis.
• Negotiated with 2 local companies to achieve trade-offs by adopting this system.

Extracurricular Experience
Model United Nations
Head of Public Relations Department
• Assigned as the Dais member of the 4th & 5th Model United Nations Conference of Northwest University
• Participated in the 12th China Model United Nations, Shanghai (Two Quotas per University)
• Awarded as the Outstanding Delegate of the 15th MUN Conference of Northwestern Polytechnic University
English Debate Team (British Parliament System)
Vice President
• Practiced Debate Demos and presented News Sharing & Case Analysis on a weekly basis
• Participated in the 2016 China Open, the largest debate competition in Mainland China
• Won the 1st prize in the English Debate Competition of Xi’an International Studies University

Languages
Mandarin (C2), English (C1), French (A2)


Thanks a lot!!!!! Open to any mean words, just bring all on!

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Martin0108 wrote:
Hello, guys!
This is my first post on gmatclub! (Excited!)
congrats on your first post on GMAT Club! It is a great forum.
Last two months I have been searching through the whole forum and got my first draft of CV done with tips and advice found here. So, the first thing coming to my mind upon my completion is to post it here, since I know everyone here is super nice and professional!

Currently I am a senior college student in China, and plan to apply for a B-school in Europe, Nova sbe hopefully, so, really hope I can get some help here. Appreciate every comment! (Anything about Nova sbe is more than welcome!)


Educational Background
Bachelor: Northwest University (211), Xi’an City, P.R. China
Major in International Economics and Trade
• Overall GPA: 3.46/4(Top 15%), Major GPA: 3.5/4, 85.45/100 On Average
Exchange student: FoGuang University, Yilan County, Taiwan
Major in Finance and Applied Economics
• Overall GPA: 3.96/4(Top 5%), Major GPA: 3.95/4, 92.29/100 On Average

Honors & Scholarships
• National Motivational Scholarship (Three Times)
• 2nd Academic scholarship of Northwest University (Two Times)
• 3rd Academic Scholarship of Northwest University
• 2nd Prize in the National English Competition for College Students
• National Volunteer Certificate of Social Investigation in New Rural Area of China

Professional Experience
HNA Modern Logistics Group, Xi’an City
Summer Intern, Eco-Innovation Department (12 weeks)suggest giving dates rather than #weeks
• Proposed and drafted the Business Plan “Eco-Box” with my mentor, which was selected as an Incubation
Project by the Innovation Committee.
• Analyzed 6 logistic enterprises’ profit models, and launched 6 project reports accordingly.what did you discover?
• Participated in the design of Innovative management system actively by utilizing knowledge of Management,
International Business and Distribution Economics.
China Construction Bank, Leping City
Summer Intern, Consultant (7 weeks) suggest also you put the months- and think what key result or actionable item did you accomplish- sometimes it is hard in 7 weeks to have a big result- but if you can quantify anything that is always more impressive than just saying you got training.
• Received proficient training and thus strengthened understanding of financial products and markets.
• Collected and organized news about economics and finance on a daily basis.
• Translated 10+ promotion announcements, resulting in high praise from the Director of Bank Consultant.

Academic Project
“Internet Plus” National Project: An Investigation and Exploitation of Source Reduction System of Illegal
Water Discharge & Gas Emission (3rd Prize)
• Initiated a research group of 7 to investigate the status quo of local Pollutant Discharge Enterprises.
• Created and compiled the Operation System and Profit Mode for a sustainable commercialization of this
Source Reduction System using Input-Output tables and Feasibility Analysis.
• Negotiated with 2 local companies to achieve trade-offs by adopting this system.

Extracurricular Experience
Model United Nations
Head of Public Relations Department
• Assigned as the Dais member of the 4th & 5th Model United Nations Conference of Northwest University
• Participated in the 12th China Model United Nations, Shanghai (Two Quotas per University)
• Awarded as the Outstanding Delegate of the 15th MUN Conference of Northwestern Polytechnic University
English Debate Team (British Parliament System)
Vice President
• Practiced Debate Demos and presented News Sharing & Case Analysis on a weekly basis
• Participated in the 2016 China Open, the largest debate competition in Mainland China
• Won the 1st prize in the English Debate Competition of Xi’an International Studies University

Languages
Mandarin (C2), English (C1), French (A2)
Definitely off to a good start here!

Thanks a lot!!!!! Open to any mean words, just bring all on!

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New post 07 Nov 2017, 18:09
StratusMBACounselor wrote:
Martin0108 wrote:
Hello, guys!
This is my first post on gmatclub! (Excited!)
congrats on your first post on GMAT Club! It is a great forum.
Last two months I have been searching through the whole forum and got my first draft of CV done with tips and advice found here. So, the first thing coming to my mind upon my completion is to post it here, since I know everyone here is super nice and professional!

Currently I am a senior college student in China, and plan to apply for a B-school in Europe, Nova sbe hopefully, so, really hope I can get some help here. Appreciate every comment! (Anything about Nova sbe is more than welcome!)


Educational Background
Bachelor: Northwest University (211), Xi’an City, P.R. China
Major in International Economics and Trade
• Overall GPA: 3.46/4(Top 15%), Major GPA: 3.5/4, 85.45/100 On Average
Exchange student: FoGuang University, Yilan County, Taiwan
Major in Finance and Applied Economics
• Overall GPA: 3.96/4(Top 5%), Major GPA: 3.95/4, 92.29/100 On Average

Honors & Scholarships
• National Motivational Scholarship (Three Times)
• 2nd Academic scholarship of Northwest University (Two Times)
• 3rd Academic Scholarship of Northwest University
• 2nd Prize in the National English Competition for College Students
• National Volunteer Certificate of Social Investigation in New Rural Area of China

Professional Experience
HNA Modern Logistics Group, Xi’an City
Summer Intern, Eco-Innovation Department (12 weeks)suggest giving dates rather than #weeks
• Proposed and drafted the Business Plan “Eco-Box” with my mentor, which was selected as an Incubation
Project by the Innovation Committee.
• Analyzed 6 logistic enterprises’ profit models, and launched 6 project reports accordingly.what did you discover?
• Participated in the design of Innovative management system actively by utilizing knowledge of Management,
International Business and Distribution Economics.
China Construction Bank, Leping City
Summer Intern, Consultant (7 weeks) suggest also you put the months- and think what key result or actionable item did you accomplish- sometimes it is hard in 7 weeks to have a big result- but if you can quantify anything that is always more impressive than just saying you got training.
• Received proficient training and thus strengthened understanding of financial products and markets.
• Collected and organized news about economics and finance on a daily basis.
• Translated 10+ promotion announcements, resulting in high praise from the Director of Bank Consultant.

Academic Project
“Internet Plus” National Project: An Investigation and Exploitation of Source Reduction System of Illegal
Water Discharge & Gas Emission (3rd Prize)
• Initiated a research group of 7 to investigate the status quo of local Pollutant Discharge Enterprises.
• Created and compiled the Operation System and Profit Mode for a sustainable commercialization of this
Source Reduction System using Input-Output tables and Feasibility Analysis.
• Negotiated with 2 local companies to achieve trade-offs by adopting this system.

Extracurricular Experience
Model United Nations
Head of Public Relations Department
• Assigned as the Dais member of the 4th & 5th Model United Nations Conference of Northwest University
• Participated in the 12th China Model United Nations, Shanghai (Two Quotas per University)
• Awarded as the Outstanding Delegate of the 15th MUN Conference of Northwestern Polytechnic University
English Debate Team (British Parliament System)
Vice President
• Practiced Debate Demos and presented News Sharing & Case Analysis on a weekly basis
• Participated in the 2016 China Open, the largest debate competition in Mainland China
• Won the 1st prize in the English Debate Competition of Xi’an International Studies University

Languages
Mandarin (C2), English (C1), French (A2)
Definitely off to a good start here!

Thanks a lot!!!!! Open to any mean words, just bring all on!

Posted from my mobile device


Thanks a lot!!!!!! Super helpful suggestions! you are right it is hard to describe in a quantitive way, but I will try! Merci beaucoup!

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