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Duckpond please have a look at this sample essay at accepted.com (https://www.accepted.com/mba/sampessay02.aspx) the introduction does tie into the background and future aspirations of the applicant.

What I was trying to get at was can one take a "day in the life of XXX" as a beginning of an essay and then demonstrate that XXX is wad you want to do post MBA and how XXX ties in with your background. The reason I am asking this is coz this kind of intro would be pretty engaging from a reader's point of view.


I think that essay is okay. It is, as the intro says, very clear but I don't even come close to finding it engaging. It's well written but on the boring side in my opinion.

As for your question... Yes, you can start an essay like that but you can do it poorly and do it well. That said, you can start an essay talking about almost anything and make it great/terrible.
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I am not against people writing interesting essays. I would avoid the third person though - I think it is a really dangerous format to write in as it can give a really bad impression.

As for the HBS case studies, you will see. They have all kinds of garbage in them. "As Rhyme stared out of the window at the snow-drift landscape of midway airport, he realized it was the first time he had encountered in the past weeks that he truly had the opportunity to consider the recent decisions he had made and the firms future. The past week had been extremely demanding for him, stepping in as the emergency CEO of goatse.cx...."

YES. IS TRUE. DO NOT DO.
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Basic rule of thumb re: creativity: If you are copying a creative element of a sample essay found in a book/blog/newspaper, you are not being creative. There will be many, many other essays using the same approach. Tread with caution.

And 3underscore, re: the HBS case studies, I find that the detailed description of the protagonist's mental state at the beginning of the case is crucial to my being able to empathize with their situation and analyze.....

Sorry, couldn't keep a straight face anymore. You are right. They are pure writing trash.
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