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though some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests
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B,

Great increases should be subject of last sentence
Such as should be used to show examples
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Here is my thinking -

d and e are out because we need a connecting word such as 'though' NOT 'with' to indicate the contrast mentioned in the sentence.

a is out because of 'like'

b vs c - I can't decide what is wrong with (c). In some forums they talk about c being a fragment. I don't understand how it is a fragment? Please explain how to rule out c.
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B,

Great increases should be subject of last sentence
Such as should be used to show examples

In options C, look at the elements joined by the word "AND" Are they parallel???
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increase in population and in the intensity of industrialization --> correct form of parallelism increases correctly modifies both increase in population and increase in the intensity of industrialization.

AND is an important word in the GMAT. When you find "AND" on the GMAT, pick out the elements joined by AND and check if they are parallel or if they play the same role in the sentence ( nouns, phrases )

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Here is my thinking -

d and e are out because we need a connecting word such as 'though' NOT 'with' to indicate the contrast mentioned in the sentence.

a is out because of 'like'

b vs c - I can't decide what is wrong with (c). In some forums they talk about c being a fragment. I don't understand how it is a fragment? Please explain how to rule out c.

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This is the sentence with choice C: Humans have been damaging the environment for centuries by overcutting trees and farming too intensively, and though some protective measures, such as establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries having been taken decades ago, great population increases and in the intensity of industrialization are causing a worldwide ecological crisis.

In this sentence, notice what appears after "increases and". It is "in the intensity...". This is not a complete phrase. What in the intensity of industrialization has caused ecological crisis? We do not know that. Hence, one of the subjects is not complete. Hence we have a fragment here.

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Humans have been damaging the environment for centuries by overcutting trees and farming too intensively, and though some protective measures, like the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great increases in population and in the intensity of industrialization are causing a worldwide ecological crisis.

A. though some protective measures, like the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great increases in population : Absence of Verb and use of Like to give examples

B. though some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, were taken decades ago, great increases in population

C. though some protective measures, such as establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries having been taken decades ago, great population increases - Absence of verb

D. with some protective measures, like establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries that were taken decades ago, great increases in population - No contrast and use of Like

E. with some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great population increases - No contrast and absence of verb

B is clear Answer.
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The first decision point is to remove A and D for using like for denoting examples. The second point is to eliminate C for using 'having been taken' along with 'though', rendering the dependent clause a fragment. E has the problem of using 'population increases' that is not parallel with 'in the intensity of industrialization'

B remains and one can click it with aplomb.
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Hi could someone explain why we need comma before "and" in this sentence =
"""Humans have been damaging the environment for centuries by overcutting trees and farming too intensively, and though.."""
why we should use comma cause "and" in here but it is not marker of parallelism ! after "and" we have DC "THOUGH" . and why we must not use period before "and".
I mean THE construction "IC + , + AND + DC+ , + IC." is always correct ? according to this question
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We all know that we need to use a comma + and before the last of item of a series, the reason for it to be called a serial comma. The only stipulation in such cases is that the arms of the list must be logically and structurally parallel.

Normally a comma is used between two independent clauses when a 'fanboys' such as "and", "but", "or" connects them.
Example: After gulping three large pegs, I am done with my drinks, but Tom is still guzzling pints unmindful of the impending task.
However, one can choose to omit the comma even while connecting two ICs, if one thinks that the ICs are short.
Ex: After three pegs, I am done but Tom is still on his fourth gear.

A clause requires the compulsory presence of a subject and verb.
Ex: After three large pegs, I am still not done but am going on.
As per the above norm, we will not require a comma here before 'but' since the second part is not a clause but only a predicate.

Now let us come the issue in context and consider choice B, which is the correct version.
Humans have been damaging the environment for centuries by overcutting trees and farming too intensively, and though some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, were taken decades ago, great increases in population

First point to note is that this is a long topic. Therefore, it will certainly need a comma to give some pause to understand the meaning in the right perspective. The first part is no doubt an IC and then it is followed by a complex sentence with a dependent clause starting with 'although' and another IC in order to complete the complex sentence structure. Technically choice B is called "compound -complex sentence" because effectively there are two ICs with teir own full-fledged subject and verb pairs and a DC with its own sub-verb pair.

I have tried to be as simple as possible and HTH
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Humans have been damaging the environment for centuries by overcutting trees and farming too intensively, and though some protective measures, like the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great increases in population and in the intensity of industrialization are causing a worldwide ecological crisis.


A. though some protective measures, like the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great increases in population

B. though some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, were taken decades ago, great increases in population

C. though some protective measures, such as establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries having been taken decades ago, great population increases

D. with some protective measures, like establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries that were taken decades ago, great increases in population

E. with some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great population increases



A. though some protective measures, like the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great increases in population - Wrong: 1) Structure 2) Idiom

B. though some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, were taken decades ago, great increases in population - Correct

C. though some protective measures, such as establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries having been taken decades ago, great population increases - Wrong: 1) Structure 2) 2 Parallelism issues

D. with some protective measures, like establishing national forests and wildlife sanctuaries that were taken decades ago, great increases in population - Wrong: 1) 2 Meaning issues 2) Parallelism 3) Idiom

E. with some protective measures, such as the establishment of national forests and wildlife sanctuaries, having been taken decades ago, great population increases - Wrong: 1) Structure 2) Meaning 3) Parallelism
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