Bunuel
In his 2005 email, Ray Ozzie now Microsoft's CTO wrote a memo called 'Services Disruption', a critical evaluation of the manner in which software business has been done today as well as envisioning of the software services industry that he perceives to be the future.
(A) a critical evaluation of the manner in which software business has been done today as well as envisioning
(B) critically evaluating the manner in which software business is done today as well as a vision
(C) a critical evaluation of the manner in which software business is done today as well as a vision
(D) critically evaluating the manner in which software business is done today as well as his own envisioning
(E) critical evaluating the manner of doing software business today and a vision as well
Option A
Incorrect '
A critical evaluation' does not agree with '
envisioning'.
Option B
Incorrect '
critically evaluating' does not agree with '
A vision'.
Option C is the only option which correctly uses 'as well as'.
'
A critical evaluation' agrees with '
A vision' unlike the other options.
Option D
Incorrect '
critically evaluating' does not agree with '
his own envisioning'.
Option E
Incorrect '
critical evaluating' does not agree with '
A vision' as well.
Please correct me if my reasoning is flawed.