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In World War I, the West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office had felt that an operation initiated and funded by external powers supporting the insurgent tribes would be beneficial to the British Empire.
A. In World War I, the West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office had felt that an operation initiated and funded by external powers supporting the insurgent tribes would be beneficial to the British Empire.
B. During World War I, the UK Foreign Office’s West Asia Bureau felt that an operation initiated and funded by external powers in support of the insurgent tribes will be beneficial to the British Empire.
C. The West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office felt during World War I that an operation initiated and funded by external powers in support of their insurgent tribes would be beneficial to the British Empire.
D. An operation initiated and funded by external powers in support of their insurgent tribes was felt by the West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office to be beneficial during World War I to the British Empire.
E. The West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office felt during World War I that an operation initiated and funded by external powers supporting the insurgent tribes would be beneficial to the British Empire.
+1 for EA. In World War I, the West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office
had felt that an operation initiated and funded by external powers supporting the insurgent tribes would be beneficial to the British Empire. -->
We don't have a sequence of events. Hence, past perfect is not requiredB. During World War I, the UK Foreign Office’s West Asia Bureau felt that an operation initiated and funded by external powers in support of the insurgent tribes
will be beneficial to the British Empire.
C. The West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office felt during World War I that an operation initiated and funded by external powers in support of
their insurgent tribes would be beneficial to the British Empire.
D. An operation initiated and funded by external powers in support of
their insurgent tribes was felt by the West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office to be beneficial during World War I to the British Empire.
E. The West Asia Bureau of the UK’s Foreign Office
felt during World War I that an operation initiated and funded by external powers supporting the insurgent tribes
would be beneficial to the British Empire. -->
Corrects the tense error in A. No other grammatical errors