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In 1911, Katherine Mansfield published In a German Pension, a collection of short stories, at only nineteen years old, while a contemporary of James Joyce, but a work that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared was a remarkable book to have written at so young an age.

A. Katherine Mansfield published In a German Pension, a collection of short stories, at only nineteen years old, while a contemporary of James Joyce, but a work that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared was

B. when she was only nineteen, Katherine Mansfield, a contemporary of James Joyce, published In a German Pension, a collection of short stories that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared

C. when she was only nineteen, Katherine Mansfield was a contemporary of James Joyce and published In a German Pension, a collection of short stories that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared

D. Katherine Mansfield, a contemporary of James Joyce, published In a German Pension, when she was only nineteen, a collection of short stories and a work that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared

E. James Joyce's contemporary Katherine Mansfield published In a German Pension, when she was only nineteen, a collection of short stories that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared was

In general sense, do modifiers (-ed/-ing) modify the non-restrictive clauses/phrases (the ones that provide additional info about the subject) preceeding the modifier?

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Kindly remove the highlighted portion from the underlined part.

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B seems to be best choice

when she was only nineteen, Katherine Mansfield, a contemporary of James Joyce, published In a German Pension, a collection of short stories that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared

Modifiers are correctly mentioned
Modifier about book is also correct.
Also usage of declare XY

Other choices lack these things
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Isn't there a grammar mistake in the sentence? Shouldn't it be "[...] a collection of short stories that her editor and future husband, Jonathan Middleton Murray, declared a remarkable book to have been written at so young an age" instead of "to have written"? After all, the stories were written, not wrote?
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