Bunuel
Many women
who might otherwise choose teaching as a career in the past are now going into business, government, and industry, areas where there are opportunities not previously available to them.
(A) who might otherwise choose teaching as a career in the past
(B) who otherwise might once choose teaching as a career
(C) who might once have chosen teaching as a career
(D) who, in the past, might otherwise once have chosen teaching as a career
(E) who, as a career, might have chosen teaching in the past
OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONThe phrase ‘who might otherwise choose teaching as a career in the past’ is idiomatically wrong, and must be corrected as ‘who might otherwise have chosen teaching as a career in the past’. So, (A) is not the answer.
(B) also has the same error, and is wrong.
(C) corrects this error, and has the more elegant single word ‘once’ instead of the phrase ‘in the past’, and is the answer.
The use of both ‘once’ and ‘in the past’ in (D) results in a redundancy, rendering this choice wrong.
The phrase ‘teaching as a career’ in (C) is more elegant than the phrase ‘as a career, ... teaching’ in (E).