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Mary Stuart was born in Scotland, but never did possess great fluency in the language of the country over which she had later been called to rule; her knowledge of it was acquired chiefly, if not wholly, after she returned from France.
(A) Mary Stuart was born in Scotland, but never did possess great fluency in the language of the country over which she had later been called to rule; her knowledge of it was acquired chiefly, if not wholly, after she returned from France.
Incorrect usage of had
(B) Mary Stuart s knowledge of the language of the country over which she was later called to rule had been acquired chiefly, if not wholly, after her return from France to her birthplace in Scotland, and she never possessed great fluency in it.
Incorrect usage of had been
(C) Though born in Scotland, Mary Stuart never possessed great fluency in the language of the country over which she was later called to rule; her knowledge of it was acquired chiefly, if not wholly, after her return from France.
Having "though" here puts the sense of contrast - no other error in the sentence therefore,
Correct
(D) Although born in Scotland and never possessing great fluency in the language of the country over which she was later called to rule, Mary Stuart's knowledge of it was acquired chiefly, if not wholly, after her return from France. Modifier error - It says that Mary's knowledge was born in Scotland and never possessed great fluency in the language.
(E) Born in Scotland, Mary Stuart never did possess great fluency in the language of the country over which she was later called to rule, and her knowledge of it was acquired chiefly, if not wholly, after she returned from France.
"did possess" and "possessed" are not very different, just that "did possess" puts the emphasis on the work done.
Also, we need a contrasting word here.
I was stuck between C and E and the sole reason I chose C was because of the usage of the word "though"
But when reading the entire sentence -
"it was acquired after her return from France" sounds better than
"it was acquired after she returned from France"
Is there any difference between the two? Which one shall be chosen?
GMATNinja &
mikemcgarry can you help?