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[email protected] In your work experience section, you might be able to change some of the two liner bullets to one liners. There are ways to minimise the action verbs and get straight to the result. Applicants at times tend to share more details in each of the Accomplishment bullets in the main work experience section than the schools care for. I mean- I am currently working with someone with 12 years of GREAT Leadership experience( Awesome background) and he and I have a two page resume and a strong sense of GREED to keep the entire information intact. However, we are cutting a lot of fat from the existing bullets without actually removing the bullets completely( Even though we will have to let some bullets go) .
The point is- Read your resume from the perspective of a Layman who has not worked in your industry, and then ask yourself- How much of the extra details will that Layman really understand. If you are not able to see this, pick up a resume from another industry/Function and try to figure out how much of that are you able to understand.
Do this and you should be able to create something really nice.