Events & Promotions
|
|
GMAT Club Daily Prep
Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions. We have subscribed you to Daily Prep Questions via email.
Customized
for You
Track
Your Progress
Practice
Pays
Not interested in getting valuable practice questions and articles delivered to your email? No problem, unsubscribe here.
Jun 0308:30 AM PDT
-09:30 AM PDT
In Episode 7 of our GMAT Ninja CR series, we are rounding up the oddballs, the misfits, and the format-benders: EXCEPT, Fill-In-The-Blanks, and other unusual Critical Reasoning question types. When you see a question that ends with a literal blank line
May 2910:00 AM IST
-11:00 PM IST
Start your journey with a fully customized action plan and work with a dedicated mentor to achieve a 735+ score.- Jun 04
08:30 AM PDT
-09:30 AM PDT
For most test takers, Data Insights is the most challenging section on the GMAT, with test takers scoring several points lower on average on DI than on Quant or Verbal and completing the section with less time to spare. - Jun 10
06:00 AM PDT
-06:15 PM PDT
Register for the GMAT Club Virtual MBA Spotlight Fair – the world’s premier event for serious MBA candidates. This is your chance to hear directly from Admissions Directors at nearly every Top 30 MBA program..
19 Jun 2011, 22:20
Kudos
Bookmarks
Hi,
The explanation to one of the problem set example in MGMAT SC book is not clear to me. Can you please give more details for my concern?
4th edition; Chapter 6; problem# 5 from Problem set:
Question: Each of the following sentences contains one or more underlined modifiers. For each of these modifiers, (1) identify the word or words, if any, that it modifies, and (2) indicate whether the modifier is correct. If the modifier is incorrect, suggest a way to correct the error.
Problem# 5. Mary buys cookies made with SugarFree, an artificial sweetener, which tastes as sweet as the corn syrup that her brother loves but where there are fewer calories than in an
equivalent amount of corn syrup
Answer:
Mary buys cookies made with SugarFree, an artificial sweetener, which tastes as sweet as the corn syrup that her brother loves but which contains fewer calories than does an equivalent amount of corn syrup.
The part I do not understand in the Answer is:
How can you justify the use of fragment "than does an" in the sentence: ......fewer calories than does an
equivalent ....
The explanation to one of the problem set example in MGMAT SC book is not clear to me. Can you please give more details for my concern?
4th edition; Chapter 6; problem# 5 from Problem set:
Question: Each of the following sentences contains one or more underlined modifiers. For each of these modifiers, (1) identify the word or words, if any, that it modifies, and (2) indicate whether the modifier is correct. If the modifier is incorrect, suggest a way to correct the error.
Problem# 5. Mary buys cookies made with SugarFree, an artificial sweetener, which tastes as sweet as the corn syrup that her brother loves but where there are fewer calories than in an
equivalent amount of corn syrup
Answer:
Mary buys cookies made with SugarFree, an artificial sweetener, which tastes as sweet as the corn syrup that her brother loves but which contains fewer calories than does an equivalent amount of corn syrup.
The part I do not understand in the Answer is:
How can you justify the use of fragment "than does an" in the sentence: ......fewer calories than does an
equivalent ....
Archived Topic
Hi there,
This topic has been closed and archived due to inactivity or violation of community quality standards. No more replies are possible here.
Where to now? Join ongoing discussions on thousands of quality questions in our Sentence Correction (SC - EA only) Forum
Still interested in this question? Check out the "Best Topics" block below for a better discussion on this exact question, as well as several more related questions.
Thank you for understanding, and happy exploring!
20 Jun 2011, 08:37
Kudos
Bookmarks
Hi,
Comparisons must be unambiguous on GMAT. I would have solved this question in the following manner:
Essence: SugerFree contains fewer calories than does an equivalent amount of corn syrup.
I will not discuss the "where" ambiguity in the original sentence because the mistake is obvious. Lets say we do away with does. So we end up with something like -
SugerFree contains fewer calories than an equivalent amount of corn syrup.
The above comparison is flawed because we are comparing SugerFree's calories with corn syrup. To resolve this ambiguity we have to introduce a verb - does, not a preposition - in, to parallel contains. The resultant structure maintains parallelism and resolves any ambiguity.
I hope the above explanation clears your doubt to some extent. :-D
Comparisons must be unambiguous on GMAT. I would have solved this question in the following manner:
Essence: SugerFree contains fewer calories than does an equivalent amount of corn syrup.
I will not discuss the "where" ambiguity in the original sentence because the mistake is obvious. Lets say we do away with does. So we end up with something like -
SugerFree contains fewer calories than an equivalent amount of corn syrup.
The above comparison is flawed because we are comparing SugerFree's calories with corn syrup. To resolve this ambiguity we have to introduce a verb - does, not a preposition - in, to parallel contains. The resultant structure maintains parallelism and resolves any ambiguity.
I hope the above explanation clears your doubt to some extent. :-D
Archived Topic
Hi there,
This topic has been closed and archived due to inactivity or violation of community quality standards. No more replies are possible here.
Where to now? Join ongoing discussions on thousands of quality questions in our Sentence Correction (SC - EA only) Forum
Still interested in this question? Check out the "Best Topics" block above for a better discussion on this exact question, as well as several more related questions.
Thank you for understanding, and happy exploring!
Moderators:
645 posts
