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555-605 Level|   Idioms/Diction/Redundancy|   Parallelism|                        
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More and more in recent years, cities are stressing the arts as a means to greater economic development and investing millions of dollars in cultural activities, despite strained municipal budgets and fading federal support.

(A) to greater economic development and investing
(B) to greater development economically and investing
(C) of greater economic development and invest
(D) of greater development economically and invest
(E) for greater economic development and the investment of


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This one was surprisingly hard. I get the explanations here but the use of "investing" really doesnt sound good to me. The ellipsis makes it sound odd. Without the ellipsis it would sound good though.

"As a means to greater economic development and are investing"

Or else I would prefer the "non-parallel" construction, at least if it was something like this:

"As a means to greater economic development and they invest"

Right now I would not be able to choose the correct option here. Anyone else reacting to the oddly-sounding "are-omitted investing"?

Thanks in advance.

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Doubt(option E could be correct as well) – structure
Subject – cities
Verb(only one) – are stressing
What are they stressing?(arts as a means for 2 things economic development and investment)[the 2 nouns are parallel]
Modifier(PP) – despite….[modifying are stressing, cities are stressing despite 2 things strained budgets and fading support]
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Doubt(option E could be correct as well) – structure
Subject – cities
Verb(only one) – are stressing
What are they stressing?(arts as a means for 2 things economic development and investment)[the 2 nouns are parallel]
Modifier(PP) – despite….[modifying are stressing, cities are stressing despite 2 things strained budgets and fading support]

Hello waytowharton,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, Option E is incorrect because it forms an illogical meaning through the phrase "and the investment of millions of dollars"

Option E maintains parallelism between "greater economic development" and "the investment of millions of dollars", illogically implying that the cities are stressing the arts as a means to achieve greater economic development and as a means to invest millions of dollars in cultural activities; the intended meaning is that the cities are stressing the arts as a means to achieve greater economic development, and the cities are investing millions of dollars in cultural activities.

In other words, Option E incorrectly implies that the cities are taking one action to fulfill two goals, but the intended meaning is that the cities are taking two actions.

We hope this helps.
All the best!
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