OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
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Never again will sports fans suffer
collective grief as much as they had the day that Joe DiMaggio died.
A) collective grief as much as they
had B)
so much collective grief
asC)
so much grief collectively
thanD)
as much collective grief
as they
didE)
as much grief collectively
thanThe correct idiom is
AS . . . AS.In a comparison question, if you see one
as, start looking for another.
This idiom is frequently tested.
Correct: As X As YWrong: So X as Y
Wrong: As X Than Y
Wrong: So X Than Y
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(On this last one, it is wrong unless you are looking at "so" as an intensifier and X is a comparative phrase such as "much taller."
Correct:
One twin is so much taller than the other that most people do not realize that the two are twins. • Meaning? Sports fans never suffered as much grief as they suffered the day that Joe DiMaggio died.
• Split #1 - comparison idiom AS ... ASOptions B, C, and E, respectively, incorrectly use
so ... as,
so ... than, and
as ... than.
Eliminate B, C, and E.
• Split #2 - we need a past tense verb to match diedI suspect that quite a few of you will say that option A is incorrect because it uses past perfect.
In fact, I see that reason given in the thread.
Option A does not use past perfect.
You
are correct that past perfect (as in
had sufferED) would be incorrect; past perfect denotes the earlier of two past events, and sports fan suffered grief
after DiMaggio died.
But option A is wrong because
had is nonsensical and means nothing, not because option A uses past perfect.
Option A does not say
had suffered.
Here is option A:
Never again will sports fans suffer collective grief as much as they had the day that Joe DiMaggio died.Option A does not use past perfect. At all.
Most of you know that in English we drop or omit words and that this construction is called
ellipsis.
Whatever is omitted is then implied in the elided part.
But the word must actually be present in the sentence for you to omit and then imply it.
Past perfect would be
had suffered.
But the word
suffered is nowhere to be found in option A.
→ The word
suffer exists. Not
suffered.→ If we say
had, the only word we can "pick up" as the rest of the verb is suffer, this way:
as much as they had suffer . . .The word
had in Option A does not mean and cannot mean
had suffered.
Look at option A:
Never again will sports fans suffer collective grief as much as they had the day that Joe DiMaggio died.IF past perfect were correct (and it is not), we would need either
(1) to state the whole verb, i.e.,
had suffered, or
(2) to use the word
did, which could stand in for
suffered.
If you want to learn about ellipsis, helping verbs, and the "universal" verb (do), you can read my post
here.
The subjects might sound a bit scary or intimidating.
Don't worry. Read the question. Try the question. Read my explanation. Read the examples.
You will catch on, even if you must repeat this process many times.
Option A is nonsensical.
It requires the word
did at the end ("as much as they did") in order to convey "as much as they suffered."
Eliminate A
By POE, the answer is D.Option D uses the correct AS . . . AS idiom.
It also correctly deploys the words "as they did" to mean "as they suffered."
Did can stand in for almost any verb in English. (The post to which I linked above gives you the two verbs that did/do/does cannot substitute for.)
COMMENTSRanonBanerjee , welcome to SC Butler.
We are glad to have you.
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And
DarkKnight800 , good to "see" you again.
Answers here are very good.
Nice work.