Official Explanation
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click Here THE PROMPTQuote:
Over the course of three decades spent as a field veterinarian with the National Forest Service,
Dr. Lynn treats several large mammals escaping from traps and snares set by poachers.
• TAKEAWAY: verb tense trigger
→ Time periods such as "over the course of three decades" trigger certain constructions.
First and obviously, future tense is out.
Second, simple present tense is out.
→ Wrong: Over the course of a decade, the Department of Homeland Security
warns that domestic right-wing terrorists pose the greatest national security thread to the U.S.
We need a verb tense that will connect the past to the present (or to the very recent past).
All "perfect" tenses are used to make connections in time—for example, to "bridge" the past and the present.
Why are they called "perfect" tenses? (I'm leaving out the progressive or continuous tenses for a moment.)
The action has been "perfected"—finished, completed, achieved.
The "perfect" grammatical aspect is essentially that something is "done."
At the same time, simple past will not work: it's a discrete moment in time.
Present perfect = HAS/HAVE + past participle (verbED)
→ He has harbored dreams of emulating tsars and of empire building for the last 30 years.
→ He has been called "the Butcher of Aleppo" since 2015.
You can read about present perfect progressive
here. THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Over the course of three decades spent as a field veterinarian with the National Forest Service,
Dr. Lynn treats several large mammals escaping from traps and snares set by poachers.
• Verb error
We do not use present tense "treats" to describe 30 years' of veterinarian work that started in the past.
In addition, while simple present can describe a general truth, she will not always treat such animals.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) Over the course of three decades spent as a field veterinarian with the National Forest Service,
Dr. Lynn treated several large mammals escaping from traps and snares set by poachers. • Tough call. The sentence is grammatical but includes a weird modifier:
mammals escaping from traps and snaresMammals escaping is a reduced relative clause.
→ Not-reduced relative clause:
. . . mammals that were escaping from traps and snaresTo reduce (shorten) this clause (you see this all the time but may not realize it):
1) drop the relative pronoun (that)
2 ) drop the "to be" verb (were)
3) keep the adjective (escaping)
→ Now, was the vet always treating mammals that were escaping traps and shares set by poachers?
How was she treating them if they were .... escaping?
Something about this construction is not exactly wrong, but from a usage (diction) standpoint, it seems a little strange.
KEEP, but look for a better answer.
Quote:
C) Over the course of three decades spent as a field veterinarian with the National Forest Service,
Dr. Lynn has treated several large mammals that escaped from traps and snares set by poachers. • I see no errors
• "has treated" fits properly with "over the course of the last three decades"
• [i]mammals that escaped is more logical that "mammals escaping."
She would not [first or mostly]
treat the escaping animals. SHe would help them escape, then treat them . . . in which case, we end up with "mammals that escaped."
ELIMINATE B
KEEP C
Quote:
D) Over the course of three decades spent as a field veterinarian with the National Forest Service,
Dr. Lynn has treated several large mammals who escaped from traps and snares set by poachers.
• WHO is used
only for human beings (and possibly beloved pets, though GMAC has not gone that far yet)
→ to talk about animals, use
that (
mammals that escaped . . .)
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) Over the course of three decades spent as a field veterinarian with the National Forest Service,
Dr. Lynn has been treating several large mammals who escaped from traps and snares set by poachers.
• WHO is used
only for human beings (and possibly beloved pets, though GMAC has not gone that far yet)
→ to talk about animals, use
that (
mammals that escaped . . .)
Same problem as that in D.
ELIMINATE E
The best answer is C.COMMENTSKudos to all for nice work.