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Please check my essay and give comments - Globalization

Globalization is something than we can’t see but we can feel the effects of it. It’s a process of interaction among the people, companies and governments of different countries. We can feel globalization almost everywhere nowadays. People eat American fast-food, wear Italian shoes and Mexican shirts, drive Japanese cars and listen to Korean music. Generally speaking, globalization is a blend of cultures. Some people think that it’s a new process. In fact, globalization existed even during Middle Ages, when people decided to trade goods with merchants from distant countries. Since 1980, it has begun to move at a faster pace. Today globalization is at its peak. There are, of course, some advantages and disadvantages of this process. The best thing is that people can buy and sell whatever they want from every corner of our planet. Internet has made it easier. People enjoy the variety of choice and prices. Globalization also gives an opportunity to learn more about culture of other nations. Countries focus on what they can do better instead of making bad-quality products. For example, Belgium is good at agriculture and producing fine chocolate but it doesn’t produce cars. Thus, they can buy cars from Germany or France. Another advantage of globalization is the growth of international companies. They can open affiliates in different countries and create additional workplace for local people. The first issue on the list of disadvantages that globalization has brought is the pollution of the environment. The building of new harmful factories has resulted into considerable environmental problems. Another disadvantage is the fact that globalization gradually destroys cultural identity. It’s especially obvious when European people try to impose their traditions and customs on Asian nations. And last but not the least: domestic producers also suffer. They find it difficult to sell their produce when people buy everything on international market.
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Good job!
My peace of advice - you should practice more. I had experience of IELTS preparation. And I know for sure that 40 min isn't enough for pretty large piece of writing like that. My practical tip for you - make a short thesis plan what to write about. You should have a scheme to follow. And you should also practice writing on different topics. In my experince, I read essay samples and then wrote my own one. I may recommend you this essay database - essay.town. It's free. Enjoy.
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New post 20 Nov 2017, 07:19
Nice buddy You are doing a great job.
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New post 20 Nov 2017, 07:27
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New post 26 Nov 2017, 07:58
YuriSmith wrote:
Generally speaking, globalization is a blend of cultures. Some people think that it’s a new process. In fact, globalization existed even during Middle Ages, when people decided to trade goods with merchants from distant countries. Since 1980, it has begun to move at a faster pace.


I don't see the logical connection between the second sentence and what follows. I'd change In fact with something suggesting contrast such as however. According to your definition, any kind of exchange between cultures counts as globalisation. This means that it'd go well beyond the Middle Ages. Plus, it's hard to say that, over the centuries, trade was a form of globalization, as only some societal groups could actually adopt practices from other cultures (mostly, rich and noble). The process, then, is more about a structural uniformation of cultural practices that, as you rightly say, spread at a faster pace in the second half of the 20th century.
Overall, it's a good essay, I'd just look for some minutiae that would render it even better. :)
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