Hello
Admissionado team. Would you please evaluate my profile? I want to work for McKinsey in Germany eventually so I want to earn an MBA. My target schools are MBS, ESMT, and WHU. Here's my profile:
- 29, female, Asian
- Bachelor of Science, Biochemistry from the University of the Philippines Manila (GPA 2.75/4.0) in 2011
- I was supposed to graduate in 2005 but I had to work full time beginning my second year in uni to support my family financially. This affected my grades really bad.

If there are any redeeming factors in my transcript, I passed all my lab courses with good grades and I also received high marks for my thesis.
- Total work experience: 8 years, 10 months; two companies (a Fortune 1000 BPO and a Fortune 500 German FMCG)
- I worked for 6.5 years for a BPO in Manila where I showed career progression from staff to HR manager (with responsibility of 4,000 headcount)
- I'm currently working for a German FMCG in Central Europe as HR for Expat Management (since Feb 2013; I transferred from the Manila office); I am managing the expatriation of high level employees of the company
- I am yet to take my GMAT
- Extra-curriculars: assisted in a medical mission once, participated in a typhoon relief activity, hosted a Christmas party for children who were victims of violence, joined a community building project for Habitat for Humanity, participated in a mangrove habitat preservation, volunteered as a cashier for the city library to raise funds for the benefit of the blind, taught in an orphanage, diversity and inclusion ambassador for my current company
- Continuous Education: went through a management development program with the BPO I used to work for, trained in Six Sigma, Project Management and Records Management (ISO 9001), attended Accounting for Non-Accountants workshops, trained in Statistics and SPSS, currently learning the German language (set to take my B1 test in August).
Please let me know my weak points (aside from my horrible GPA) and how I can increase my chances of getting into the schools I targeted. Thank you in advance!