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28 Jan 2014, 02:30
The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of The Mercury, a weekly newspaper:
"Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury's circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.

The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

Last edited by Alexandra23 on 03 Feb 2014, 01:07, edited 2 times in total.

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02 Feb 2014, 07:08
Alexandra23 wrote:
The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

hey, i think you forgot to post argument. It is difficult to evaluate you awa without the argument.

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03 Feb 2014, 01:10
bharatdivvela wrote:
Alexandra23 wrote:
The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

hey, i think you forgot to post argument. It is difficult to evaluate you awa without the argument.

Hey,
I have already post the argument.

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22 Feb 2014, 07:20
Alexandra23 wrote:
The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of The Mercury, a weekly newspaper:
"Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury's circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.

The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are (may be) other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

nice work..
first of all, sorry for the late reply..
In the second paragraph, you have brought some facts which were not in the argument. You have stated points as if they are facts. I don't think that that works and don't know whether it is ok on gmat
In the last paragraph, instead of writing in a generic way, you could have specifically stated what more info would strengthen the argument.

I am not an expert and hence you don't take too serious to each and every mistake I have pointed to. Just have a look at it, and if you feel it is worth changing, do it. otherwise no.

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22 Feb 2014, 14:43
bharatdivvela wrote:
Alexandra23 wrote:
The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of The Mercury, a weekly newspaper:
"Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury's circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.

The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are (may be) other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

nice work..
first of all, sorry for the late reply..
In the second paragraph, you have brought some facts which were not in the argument. You have stated points as if they are facts. I don't think that that works and don't know whether it is ok on gmat
In the last paragraph, instead of writing in a generic way, you could have specifically stated what more info would strengthen the argument.

I am not an expert and hence you don't take too serious to each and every mistake I have pointed to. Just have a look at it, and if you feel it is worth changing, do it. otherwise no.

bharatdivvela wrote:
Alexandra23 wrote:
The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of The Mercury, a weekly newspaper:
"Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury's circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.

The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are (may be) other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

nice work..
first of all, sorry for the late reply..
In the second paragraph, you have brought some facts which were not in the argument. You have stated points as if they are facts. I don't think that that works and don't know whether it is ok on gmat
In the last paragraph, instead of writing in a generic way, you could have specifically stated what more info would strengthen the argument.

I am not an expert and hence you don't take too serious to each and every mistake I have pointed to. Just have a look at it, and if you feel it is worth changing, do it. otherwise no.

Hi, thank you for your comments. I'll try to change my essay.

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22 Feb 2014, 21:55
Alexandra23 wrote:
bharatdivvela wrote:
Alexandra23 wrote:
The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of The Mercury, a weekly newspaper:
"Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury's circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.

The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are (may be) other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

nice work..
first of all, sorry for the late reply..
In the second paragraph, you have brought some facts which were not in the argument. You have stated points as if they are facts. I don't think that that works and don't know whether it is ok on gmat
In the last paragraph, instead of writing in a generic way, you could have specifically stated what more info would strengthen the argument.

I am not an expert and hence you don't take too serious to each and every mistake I have pointed to. Just have a look at it, and if you feel it is worth changing, do it. otherwise no.

bharatdivvela wrote:
Alexandra23 wrote:
The following appeared in an announcement issued by the publisher of The Mercury, a weekly newspaper:
"Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury's circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.

The argument claims that since the lower-priced newspaper The Bugle started, the circulation of the Mercury has declined by 10 000 readers, and the Mercury should reduce its price below that of the Bugle to increase its readership to former level. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion that the increased circulation will attract more businesses to buy advertising space on the paper is relied on the assumption, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.
First, the argument assumes that the lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle is the sole reason for decline in its readership. This assumption is not substantiated in any way. There are (may be) other reasons for decline in the readership, i.e: free-online news, cable news, the growth of connected devices - especially mobiles, aging audience etc. The recent study shows that more than half the population read news online and prefer not to buy the print version of newspapers. The recent surveys also found that newspapers have suffered dramatic circulation declines all over the world, when free-online news market exploded. So, it could be a coincident that the Bugle entered the market when free-online news market exploded and impacted paid-newspaper market. The argument would have been much clearer, if it explicitly gave examples of how the low-priced newspaper the Bugle is responsible for the decline in the readership of the Mercury.
Second, the argument claims that the price of the Mercury should be reduced to increase its readership to the original level. This conclusion is not convincing as price is not the only factor influencing readers whether or not to read a certain newspaper. There are a whole host of factors that could influence the circulation of newspapers, i.e. paper’s format, extend and accuracy of newspaper’s news, timelines, rate of errors etc.
The following examples could support my point of view:
Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post - the circulation of Higher-priced newspaper Kiev Post is higher than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
Lower-priced newspaper The Day - - the circulation of newspaper The Day lower than in any other newspapers in Ukraine.
In fact, the argument does not draw a parallel on how lower price will increase the readership. If the author provide link between the lower price and increase in readers, then the argument would have sound more convincing.
In summary, the argument is flawed and unconvincing. It could be considerable strengthen if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to make this argument more convincing, the author should have provided evidences that support the conclusion of the argument.

nice work..
first of all, sorry for the late reply..
In the second paragraph, you have brought some facts which were not in the argument. You have stated points as if they are facts. I don't think that that works and don't know whether it is ok on gmat
In the last paragraph, instead of writing in a generic way, you could have specifically stated what more info would strengthen the argument.

I am not an expert and hence you don't take too serious to each and every mistake I have pointed to. Just have a look at it, and if you feel it is worth changing, do it. otherwise no.

Hi, thank you for your comments. I'll try to change my essay.

one more thing, try to avoid using I,my... so on.. In argument essay, it is not ok to use first person pronouns

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