Dear
Admissionado-Team,
I would appreciate your evaluation of my profile as someone targeting a Top 10 MBA program.
Please
- advise on chances of a successful application and areas to improve,
- address my GMAT score relative to my overall profile,
- and suggest names of b-schools that might be receptive to my profile.
Thank you a lot for investing your time, this will be really helpful.
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Basic demographic infoI'm a 30 years old German male.
Might makes sense to mention working class background in essay.
Educational BackgroundUndergraduate degree: Bachelor in Business Administration, accounting major, GPA 3.6/4.0
Graduate degree: Master in Management, GPA 3.7/4.0
PhD in Management from German top university (department admits ~1/200 applicants), research stays at two European top universities
GMAT: 680
Work experience- finance/consulting: 3 years, Big 4, promotion after 1 year, international exposure, project experiences (incl. minor leadership experiences) in financial valuation, change management, due diligence, large scale IT projects
- research: 2 years, acquired and lead research project at DAX30 technology company, C-level sponsorship
- IT/project management certifications
Extracurriculars- mentoring two young professionals (working at MBB and in pharma), 3 years, focus on career/academic advice
- refugee relief, mentoring/child sponsorship, 1 year
- mentoring a group of high school students in business case development, teaching business know-how, 1 year, as part of a BCG initiative
- admission committee member for bachelor's, master's and PhD program
- apprentice trainer at the German chamber of commerce and industry
Short/Long term goalsGoal after MBA is to head for strategy consulting, preferably with focus on health or public sector projects.
After that, entrepreneurship in healthtec/educational sector.
Alternatively join VC fund and help bringing good ideas to life.
USPsI think I might be able to differentiate myself in one or more of the following ways. Not sure though if AdComs are looking for these kinds of things.
- undergraduate degree earned along part-time job, graduate degree (masters) along full-time finance/consulting job
- first in family with academic degree
- studied management, then switched to applied computer science topic for final thesis to learn programming, thesis then got published in selective graduate publishing series
- secured three scholarships (ages 19-27): one from private company, two from German government (total >50.000 USD of funds)
- one supervised undergraduate student received award for his final project, another secured a scholarship
RecommendationsMy PhD supervisors would probably write highly appreciative recs based on 4 years of intense collaboration, showcased by specific examples.
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