STEP 1 - UNDERSTANDING INTENDED MEANING
Realtors and advocates for responsible housing policies declare that the real estate market may require more regulation than used to be thought comfortable.
Errors: None Choice A :
CorrectIntended meaning:1. We are talking about realtors and advocates for responsible housing policies.
2. They declare that
3. the real estate market may require (in the present) more regulation than was earlier thought to be comfortable.
STEP 2: EVALUATE MEANING OF REMAINING CHOICES
CHOICE B
Realtors and advocates for responsible housing policies d
eclares that the real estate market may require more regulation than used to be thought.• SV pair does not agree in number.
Incorrect Choice.CHOICE C
Realtors and advocates for responsible housing policies
declare that the real estate market may need more regulation than used to be comfortably thought.
• The adjective “comfortable” applicable to the noun “regulation” has been incorrect changed into an adverb “comfortably” modifying the verb “thought”.
• Complete change from the intended meaning.
Incorrect Choice.CHOICE D
Realtors and advocates for responsible housing policies,
declaring about the real estate market that it may require more regulation than used to be thought comfortable• There is no verb for the subject – realtors and advocates.
• “declaring” without the helping verb is just a modifier.
• The sentence is too wordy “declaring about…that it may…”
Incorrect Choice.CHOICE E
Realtors and advocates for responsible housing policies,
declaring the real estate market that regulations that used to be thought comfortable may need to be increased.• Same SV error as in choice D.
• The placement of the connector “that” is awkward. The construction illogically seems to imply that the realtors, etc are declaring something to the real estate market.
• The regulations were not thought comfortable.
Incorrect Choice.