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Pls explain ur ans.

Coronary angiography, a sophisticated method "for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses" x-rays to observe cardiac function.
(A) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(B) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of heart, is now administered selectively, because of using
(C) for diagnosing coronary disease, involves the introduction of dye into the arteries of the heart and is now administered selectively, because it uses
(D) to diagnose coronary disease that involves the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(E) to diagnose coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, which is now administered selectively, uses
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24 Aug 2005, 12:23

Coronary angiography, a sophisticated method for diagnosing coronary disease, involves the introduction of dye into the arteries of the heart and is now administered selectively, because it uses x-rays to observe cardiac function.
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24 Aug 2005, 14:20
C. uses , effectively to not hurt the meaning of the sentence..
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25 Aug 2005, 09:46
One more vote for C
Involving may make readers misunderstand that coronary disease involves the dying process instead of the angiography. And Method for is idiomatic

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Pls explain ur ans.

Coronary angiography, a sophisticated method "for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses" x-rays to observe cardiac function.
(A) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(B) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of heart, is now administered selectively, because of using
(C) for diagnosing coronary disease, involves the introduction of dye into the arteries of the heart and is now administered selectively, because it uses
(D) to diagnose coronary disease that involves the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(E) to diagnose coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, which is now administered selectively, uses
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25 Aug 2005, 09:46
One more vote for C
Involving may make readers misunderstand that coronary disease involves the dying process instead of the angiography. And Method for is idiomatic

modon wrote:
Pls explain ur ans.

Coronary angiography, a sophisticated method "for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses" x-rays to observe cardiac function.
(A) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(B) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of heart, is now administered selectively, because of using
(C) for diagnosing coronary disease, involves the introduction of dye into the arteries of the heart and is now administered selectively, because it uses
(D) to diagnose coronary disease that involves the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(E) to diagnose coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, which is now administered selectively, uses
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25 Aug 2005, 16:59
modon wrote:
Pls explain ur ans.

Coronary angiography, a sophisticated method "for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses" x-rays to observe cardiac function.
(A) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(B) for diagnosing coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of heart, is now administered selectively, because of using
(C) for diagnosing coronary disease, involves the introduction of dye into the arteries of the heart and is now administered selectively, because it uses
(D) to diagnose coronary disease that involves the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, is now administered selectively, because it uses
(E) to diagnose coronary disease involving the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, which is now administered selectively, uses

Another vote for C.

D and E are eliminating because medthod to is not idiomatic

B and A are out because the modifying phrase is misplaced. Plus, B is wordy.
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25 Aug 2005, 19:07
C too

- method to is not correct
- it is the coronary angiography that involve the introduction of a dye into the arteries of the heart, not the coronary disease
25 Aug 2005, 19:07
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