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The takeaway of possessive pronoun custom is;

1. A possessive pronoun can stand for a possessive noun
2. A possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun
3. A non-possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun.
4. The only case where it can‘t be accepted is when a non-possessive is used to stand for a possessive noun


Can Someone explain the above with the help of examples ? ( I am really bad at grammatical jargons )

1. A possessive pronoun can stand for a possessive noun
Peter's car runs well, but his bike does not.

2. A possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun
Peter has an expensive car, but his driving skills aren't great.

3. A non-possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun.
Peter is rich, and he owns a BMW.

4. The only case where it can‘t be accepted is when a non-possessive is used to stand for a possessive noun.
Even this actually is "accepted", as in this official question. Here, she (non-possessive pronoun) is referring to possessive noun Elizabeth Barrett Browning's.

So, the bottom-line is: This entire possessive business, isn't really anything to fuss about :).

p.s. Some familiarity with "grammatical jargons" does help.
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But in option C we have “become” as part of the choice and not “becomes”
There is no other markable difference between A and C other than “that” and “which”. Since the noun immediately preceding “that” is singular I thought of dropping A.

Please explain

Good question! First, when "that" is used as a modifier, it can describe either singular or plural entities. For example: "The shirts that Tim put in the washing machine were all clean, inspiring his daughter to give him a lengthy sermon about the evils of waste and inefficiency." Here, "shirts" is plural and it's correctly modified by "that." This is similar to the usage in (A).

If however, we were using "that" as a pronoun, in that case we'd use "those" to refer to a plural antecedent. For example, "The shirts that Tim put in the washing machine were cleaner than those he'd put in the closet." Now "those" is a stand-in for the plural noun "shirts."

The main difference between (A) and (C) is a subtle meaning issue. Consider the following:

    1) "Tim hates the dogs that try to bite him."

Here, Tim only hates the dogs trying to bite him. Presumably, there are other dogs Tim doesn't hate. The "that" modifier serves to differentiate one group from another. (If you want to use fancy terminology - and you probably shouldn't - this type of modifier is "restrictive." It's necessary to understand what dog group we're talking about.)

Contrast the above with:

    2) "Tim hates dogs, which try to bite him."

Now, Tim seems to hate dogs in general, and a characteristic of all dogs is that they want to maul Tim. ("Which" here is an unrestrictive modifier, meaning that it's just providing incidental information about dogs, not telling us what dogs we're discussing. And while you shouldn't spend much time worrying about comma usage, technically, we use a comma when we're introducing an unrestrictive modifier, such as "which.")

We see the same distinction here.

In (A), we have:

    "...irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle."

The meaning here is that the irrigation projects have only enlarged the habitat of the specific snails that are hosts of the parasite. So there are other types of freshwater snails that aren't hosts and whose habitats haven't been enlarged. Makes sense.

In (C) we have:

    "...irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of freshwater snails which become the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles."

Now the meaning seems to be that irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of freshwater snails in general, and all freshwater snails are hosts for the parasite. It's also somewhat illogical to say "its life cycles" -- the parasite somehow has multiple life cycles? (Notice, also, that we're missing a comma before "which." One of the very rare instances when the absence of a comma is definitively wrong.)

It seems more logical to suggest that we're talking about a subset of freshwater snails having its habitat enlarged, as (A) does, than to suppose we're talking about all freshwater snails, as (C) does. (And, again, (C) is missing a necessary comma, and has a problem with a single parasite possessing multiple life cycles.)

I hope that helps!
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In the non underlined portion. It is referring to Schistosomiasis but in the underlined portion "its " is referring to "parasite's hosts" . Can it and it's refer to the two different things?


Vatsal7794 - Just goes to show that there are very few "rules" that one can follow blindly in SC. It is a question of what works best in the context.
The "its" is very close to parasite's and logically stands in for it. There is no meaning ambiguity.
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Hi Team, I rejected choice A because of the usage of "that". In the e-gmat videos, it was mentioned that "that" can be used to refer only things. Is this an exception or am I missing something?


Hello Shalini9241,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, it would be more accurate to say that "that" cannot be used to refer to human beings.

"that" CAN be used to refer to any living thing other than human beings, in addition to all non-living things, and "who" and "whom" are only used to refer to humans.

We hope this helps.
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it was mentioned that "that" can be used to refer only things. Is this an exception or am I missing something?

Lot of great answers already Shalini.

Note that we are talking about the use of that as a "relative pronoun" here.

As a relative pronoun, that can generally refer to any non-person (both singular and plural).

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses the use of various "Relative Pronouns". Have attached the corresponding section of the book, for your reference.
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Why dual reference of "It" is not an issue in the correct answer choice?
However, in the below question dual reference of "it" is considered ungrammatical.
https://gmatclub.com/forum/michelangelo ... 21751.html


Dual reference of 'it' is not a problem as long as the usage is clear.

Schistosomiasis is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle

S is prevalent ... and it has becomes more widespread ...

Two clauses joined with 'and' referring to the same subject 'Schistosomiasis.' 'It' clearly refer to Schistosomiasis and hence no problem.

The other 'it' is used in possessive form inside the 'that clause' and the possessive it refers to (parasite's) is right before it.
"that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle"

Was their any confusion in your mind when you read it? No. So all is fine.

As for the other question you mentioned, the issue with (D) is that it is missing a main verb.

It is believed that an eight-inch plaster model that Michelangelo used for his sculpture of David and has recently been discovered after it was lost for nearly 300 years.

that clause - an eight-inch plaster model (modifying that clause)... and has been recently discovered ...
What does 'and' join? A model and has been recently discovered ... This makes no sense.
It should be 'A model has been recently discovered ...'
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Why dual reference of "It" is not an issue in the correct answer choice?
However, in the below question dual reference of "it" is considered ungrammatical.
https://gmatclub.com/forum/michelangelo ... 21751.html

Cardinal rule #1 of Sentence Correction: do not invent rules! There is no rule that you can't use "it" to refer to two different elements in a sentence. As Karishma wisely notes (hi, Karishma!), it's 100% clear what both pronouns refer to, so the usage is fine.

Better yet, every answer choice other than (D) contains a pronoun. (B) and (E) use "their," which is wrong, because we're referring to the singular "parasite."

And then we can eliminate (C) and (D) because they refer to a parasite's "life cycles." That's illogical. A parasite has one life cycle! (They also use "which" when they should use "that," but GMAC is on record saying that they no longer test this distinction, so I wouldn't worry about this.)

So we're left with (A), which is our answer.

I hope that clears things up!
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"Their" can't refer back to "parasite's." That's the problem. Meaning-wise, we DO want to refer to the parasite, so that's why we need a choice with the singular "its."

"Their" would have to refer back to some plural noun, but as GMATNinja points out, the INTENT seems clearly for that pronoun to refer to parasite's. So we want our pronoun to refer back to that word, but we can't if our pronoun is "their." Does that clear it up?
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Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle.

Meaning:
• Schistosomiasis is a disease that is caused by a parasitic worm.
• It is prevalent in places with hot and humid climate.
• The disease has become more widespread with the increase in irrigation projects.
• These projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that play the host of the parasite for a part of its life cycle.

Error Analysis:
• Subject “that” that stands for “the freshwater snails” agrees in number and makes sense with the verb “are”. No SV pair error.
• This sentence is providing general facts about the disease and its cause. Hence simple present tense “are“ is correct.
• “that” clause correctly modifies “the freshwater snails” giving information that these snails become host to the parasite for some part in its life.
• There are no pronoun, no parallelism, no idiom and no meaning error errors.

Answer Choice Analysis:
A. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle: Correct as is.

B. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts in part of their life cycle: Incorrect. Reference of pronoun “their” distorts the intended meaning of the sentence. Plural “their” now refers to “the freshwater snails” meaning that they are host to the parasite in part of snails’ life cycle and not in part of the parasite’s life cycle. This is not the intended meaning of the sentence.

C. freshwater snails which become the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles: Incorrect. Plural “life cycles” is incorrect because a singular “parasite” can have only one life cycle and not multiple life cycles.

D. freshwater snails which become the hosts of the parasite during the parasite's life cycle: Incorrect. Repetition of “parasite’s” instead of a pronoun makes this choice wordier.

E. parasite's hosts, freshwater snails which become their hostsduring their life cycles: Incorrect. Same pronoun reference error as in B.

Take-Away
1. The pronoun must agree in number with its antecedent.
2. Be vary of the choices that distort he intended meaning of the sentence.

Hope this helps. :-)
Thanks.
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Shraddha,

haven't we learnt that a pronoun cannot refer to a possessive noun. Unless its here is referring to worm.?

Also Its mentioned by one of the members(supposedly expert) that

" MGMAT( in a reversal form its earlier rigid stand perhaps) says that the issue of possessive poison is not worth worrying about, since there has been hardly any case that has been rejected on the score of the possessive pronoun’s antecedence in the realm of GMAT.

The take away of possessive pronoun custom is;

1. A possessive pronoun can stand for a possessive noun
2. A possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun
3. A non possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun.
4. The only case where it can‘t be accepted is when a
Non- possessive is used to stand for a possessive noun "

Please comment as I have a concept that a pronoun cannot refer to a noun in possessive form.
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Hi all,

Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle.

Meaning:
• Schistosomiasis is a disease that is caused by a parasitic worm.
• It is prevalent in places with hot and humid climate.
• The disease has become more widespread with the increase in irrigation projects.
• These projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that play the host of the parasite for a part of its life cycle.

Error Analysis:
• Subject “that” that stands for “the freshwater snails” agrees in number and makes sense with the verb “are”. No SV pair error.
• This sentence is providing general facts about the disease and its cause. Hence simple present tense “are“ is correct.
• “that” clause correctly modifies “the freshwater snails” giving information that these snails become host to the parasite for some part in its life.
• There are no pronoun, no parallelism, no idiom and no meaning error errors.

Answer Choice Analysis:
A. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle: Correct as is.

B. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts in part of their life cycle: Incorrect. Reference of pronoun “their” distorts the intended meaning of the sentence. Plural “their” now refers to “the freshwater snails” meaning that they are host to the parasite in part of snails’ life cycle and not in part of the parasite’s life cycle. This is not the intended meaning of the sentence.

C. freshwater snails which become the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles: Incorrect. Plural “life cycles” is incorrect because a singular “parasite” can have only one life cycle and not multiple life cycles.

D. freshwater snails which become the hosts of the parasite during the parasite's life cycle: Incorrect. Repetition of “parasite’s” instead of a pronoun makes this choice wordier.

E. parasite's hosts, freshwater snails which become their hostsduring their life cycles: Incorrect. Same pronoun reference error as in B.

Take-Away
1. The pronoun must agree in number with its antecedent.
2. Be vary of the choices that distort he intended meaning of the sentence.

Hope this helps. :-)
Thanks.
Shraddha


Shraddha,

haven't we learnt that a pronoun cannot refer to a possessive noun. Unless its here is referring to worm.?

Also Its mentioned by one of the members(supposedly expert) that

" MGMAT( in a reversal form its earlier rigid stand perhaps) says that the issue of possessive poison is not worth worrying about, since there has been hardly any case that has been rejected on the score of the possessive pronoun’s antecedence in the realm of GMAT.

The take away of possessive pronoun custom is;

1. A possessive pronoun can stand for a possessive noun
2. A possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun
3. A non possessive pronoun can stand for a non- possessive noun.
4. The only case where it can‘t be accepted is when a
Non- possessive is used to stand for a possessive noun "

Please comment as I have a concept that a pronoun cannot refer to a noun in possessive form.



Dear ygdrasil24,

Your understanding is correct.

However, note that "its" is the possessive form of the pronoun "it".

Usually for nouns, we add an apostrophe and an "s" to indicate possessive form. ("lion's", "builder's" etc.)

However, it's on the other hand is the short form for "it is". The possessive form of "it" is "its"

As you know, the possessive form of a pronoun can refer to the possessive form of a noun.

In the above mentioned sentence "its" (possessive pronoun) is referring to "parasite's" (possessive noun).

Hope this helps :)

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Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of THE FRESHWATER SNAILS THAT ARE THE PARASITE'S HOSTS FOR PART OF ITS LIFE CYCLE.

A. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle
B. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts in part of their life cycle
C. freshwater snails which becomes the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles
D. freshwater snails which become the hosts of the parasite during the parasite's life cycles
E. parasite's hosts, freshwater snails which become their hosts during their life cycles


Can somebody please explain why cant their refer back to the SNAILS...I mean it still would make perfect sense "snail serve as host for a part in their life cycle"

I understand from the explanations that this is not the intended meaning, but how can gmat expect the test taker to peep in the author's brain?


Hi ratinarace, when dealing with pronoun questions, it's always simplest to replace the pronoun by the word it is replacing and verify that the pronoun agrees with the noun.

In this case, the sentence should be:
Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of THE FRESHWATER SNAILS THAT ARE THE PARASITE'S HOSTS FOR PART OF the worm's LIFE CYCLE. Who's life cycle are we referring to? The parasite, which in turn is referencing the worm.

If you want it to reference the snails (plural), also note that the sentence is slightly different (in part vs for part). In part usually means "as one of the reasons of" whereas for part usually means "for an incomplete period". I chose this answer in part because the idiom was good for this part of the test.

Between the intention and the phrasing, I agree that A should be the correct answer, but B is a tempting choice as well.

Hope this helps!
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hi experts, please help me to clarify this problem.
Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of THE FRESHWATER SNAILS THAT ARE THE PARASITE'S HOSTS FOR PART OF ITS LIFE CYCLE.

in the original question, first it clearly refers to a disease (Schistosomiasis)
the second its refers to parasitic worm.
as i have learnt, it should not be the case.
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Sooooo true! My hunch is that whoever writes the explanations is an intern of some sort, and not necessarily a professional question-writer at all. Plus, a lot of the questions that leak into the official guides are 10 or 15 or 20 years old -- and whoever wrote them originally is probably long gone.

Fun fact: at ETS (the company that writes the TOEFL and GRE, among other tests), the question-writers are literally in a different building from the psychometricians who design the exam. No idea if the same is true at GMAC, but it wouldn't surprise me.
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Question # 92 from the Verbal Review - 2nd Edition of the Official Guide - Sentence Correction (page 310)

Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle.

A. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle
B. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts in part of their life cycle
C. freshwater snails which becomes the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles
D. freshwater snails which become the hosts of the parasite during the parasite's life cycles
E. parasite's hosts, freshwater snails which become their hosts during their life cycles


GMATNinjaTwo "that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle" modifier describing snails

it = schistosomiasis = the parasite

Is it "its" referring to "parasite's" or schistosomiasis?
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Question # 92 from the Verbal Review - 2nd Edition of the Official Guide - Sentence Correction (page 310)

Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle.

A. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle
B. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts in part of their life cycle
C. freshwater snails which becomes the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles
D. freshwater snails which become the hosts of the parasite during the parasite's life cycles
E. parasite's hosts, freshwater snails which become their hosts during their life cycles


GMATNinjaTwo "that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle" modifier describing snails

it = schistosomiasis = the parasite

Is it "its" referring to "parasite's" or schistosomiasis?


it in it has become more widespread refers to Schistosomiasis.

its in that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle refers to parasite's. So, effectively, this portion says -- ...the the freshwater snails that are the parasite's host for part of the parasite's life cycle.

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it in it has become more widespread refers to Schistosomiasis.

its in that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle refers to parasite's. So, effectively, this portion says -- ...the the freshwater snails that are the parasite's host for part of the parasite's life cycle.

Cheers! :)


Thanks neetis5! Yes, "its" is a possessive pronoun referring to the possessive "parasite's".
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How would you see the usage of that & which in this question.
in Statement A, B - that is used
in C, D, E - which is used.

can they be used interchangeably?
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A. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle

I don’t have a whole lot to say about (A). The first thing I notice is the modifier “that are the parasite’s hosts” – and that seems like a reasonable way to modify “the freshwater snails.”

The pronoun “its” also jumps out at me, and that would have to refer to “the parasite’s”, since that’s our nearest (and most logical) singular. And that’s fine, too: “…the freshwater snails that are the parasite’s hosts for part of [the parasite’s] life cycle…” Reasonable enough.

So I guess we’ll keep (A).

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B. the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts in part of their life cycle

The biggest difference between (B) and (A) is the plural pronoun “their” in (B). And that’s a problem: “their” is plural, so it has to refer to either “the freshwater snails” or “the parasite’s hosts” – and those are the same thing, anyway. So that gives us: “… the freshwater snails that are the parasite’s hosts in part of [the freshwater snails’] life cycle.”

That’s not WRONG, exactly, if you’re willing to assume that the sentence is trying to explain what happens during the snails’ life cycle. But I think that misses the point: schistosomiasis is the grammatical subject of the sentence, and the sentence is clearly trying to explain why the disease has become more common. So presumably, the sentence is interested in explaining that the snails are hosts during part of the parasite’s life cycle. The snail’s life cycle really isn’t of interest to us, and wouldn’t help explain why the parasite has become more common.

So that’s miserably subtle, but it’s basically all we’ve got, unless you want to make an unnecessarily big deal out of the prepositions. (A) is better than (B), so we can eliminate (B).

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C. freshwater snails which becomes the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles

(C) is a little bit easier to eliminate than some of the other options. The phrase “its life cycles” really doesn’t make any sense at all: “its” presumably refers to “the parasite”, since that’s the closest (and most logical) singular noun. But then how is that “the parasite” has multiple “life cycles”? As far as I know, each parasite only has one life cycle. If not, that would be creepy AF.

There’s also a problem with the phrase “freshwater snails which becomes.” Snails are plural, so the verb would have to be “become”, not “becomes.” Plus, “which” is generally a non-restrictive modifier, so it usually follows a comma – though that’s not usually a deciding factor on GMAT questions.

So we have lots of reasons to ditch (C).

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D. freshwater snails which become the hosts of the parasite during the parasite's life cycles

(D) is a little bit better than (C)… but only a little bit.

I guess it’s nice that “its life cycles” has been changed to “the parasite’s life cycles”, but either way, it’s illogical: a singular parasite presumably has only one life cycle, not multiple “life cycles.”

It’s also nice that the subject-verb issue has been fixed (“snails… become”), but I still don’t think it’s ideal to use “which” in this type of scenario without a comma. But again: the GMAT doesn’t generally make a big deal out of comma placement, and it’s almost never a deciding factor.

And even if you ignore the comma thing, the phrase “parasite’s life cycles” is goofy enough to let us eliminate (D).

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E. parasite's hosts, freshwater snails which become their hosts during their life cycles

The plural pronoun “their” appears twice in (E), but “parasite’s” is actually singular, so “their” presumably refers to “snails.” And that’s garbage: “… freshwater snails which become [the snails’] hosts during [the snails’] life cycles…”

You could also argue that “which” needs to be preceded by a comma, as we mentioned in (C) and (D) – but again, that’s rarely a deciding factor on the GMAT.

The pronoun thing is a big deal, though. (E) is out, and we’re left with (A).
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Schistosomiasis, a disease caused by a parasitic worm, is prevalent in hot, humid climates, and it has become more widespread as irrigation projects have enlarged the habitat of the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle.

(A) the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycle - Correct

(B) the freshwater snails that are the parasite's hosts in part of their life cycle

(C) freshwater snails which becomes the parasite's hosts for part of its life cycles - SV Number agreement error and also ',' is missing before which

(D) freshwater snails which become the hosts of the parasite during the parasite's life cycles - ',' is missing before which

(E) parasite's hosts, freshwater snails which become their hosts during their life cycles - above errors + change in meaning



As we know that all pronoun refers to the one antecedent not different one, 'it' is non underlined part refers to Schistosomiasis where as 'its' in underlined part refers to parasite. therefore A can not be right answer,???

please explain.
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