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Since products in the chemical industry have extremely brief shelf lives, manufacturers of chemicals usually produce as much as possible in a short span of time, and this was a trend begun by the early manufacturers of chemical products in the nineteenth century, which is continuing in twenty-first century markets.
A. and this was a trend begun by the early manufacturers of chemical products in the nineteenth century, which is
• this is a determiner pronoun that should not be used alone. I like this car, not that one.
• was [a trend] begun is not parallel with is
• comma + which: modifies the immediately preceding noun or noun phrase; should not be used to summarize a preceding clause
B. which was a trend that began by the early manufacturers of chemical products in the nineteenth century and it is
• comma + which
• "that" is present. The trend either began in the nineteenth century or was begun by the early manufacturers . . .
• "began by" without words in between is rare. "Began" needs an object.
Correct: She began her speech by telling a joke.
Suspect/Incorrect: She began by telling a joke. That sentence would be incorrect on the GMAT
unless the object (her speech) were clear from context. She began what?
A ceremonial toast? An introduction for another speaker?
C. a trend begun by the early manufacturers of chemical products in the nineteenth century and [continuing]
• the absolute phrase needs parallel participles; as long as the participles make sense,
having one past and one present participle is fine
D. a trend begun by the early manufacturers of chemical products in the nineteenth century , it is
• begun and is are not parallel
• an absolute phrase typically does not alternate with another complete clause. Omit the "is" and keep the participle
-- in this case, the construction is incorrect because the absolute phrase needs to "finish out"
its modification of trend and the historical background of the trend in a consistent way
E. which was a trend begun by the early manufacturers of chemical products in the nineteenth century and is
• comma which
• begun and is are not parallel
Major issues tested by this question: Absolute phrases, parallel participles, and comma + which modifiers
If there seem to be two sentences "stuck together" and the options give various ways to connect the sentences;
-- and if neither the normal conjunctions nor a "which" modifier works properly as "glue";
-- and other options contain a strange-looking connector (or no connector), decide whether the latter might be an
absolute phrase.
• Absolute phrases
-- often "tack on a second thought" or tie together the first and second parts of a sentence
-- modify the main clause in some fashion (Mnemonic: absolute phrases modify "absolutely everything")
-- almost always consist of a noun and a noun modifier.
In this question, the absolute phrase is essentially a long-second part of the sentence that
both summarizes the first part
and explains the history of the first part.
The absolute phrase consists of the noun "trend" and participial modifiers.
Within the absolute phrase is a comparison signaled by the marker word "and."
The parts of speech before and after that AND must be parallel.
The comparison in this sentence is difficult. Usually we look at the right hand side of
a comparison marker word. In this case, we have "continuing," which does little to clarify what the left side should be
As I have written before, if I have a choice, I attack time-consuming parallelism LAST.
Split # 1: COMMA + WHICH• comma + which must refer to its preceding noun or noun phrase and
cannot be used to refer to an entire clause
• very rarely, the noun modified by "which" is not immediately before "which." That rare pattern does not apply here.
Nothing that precedes
which in A, B, or D qualifies as an antecedent
A:
which incorrectly modifies
nineteenth century and seems to refer to the
trendB:
which incorrectly modifies either
short span of time or, very generously,
manufacturersWhich is intended to summarize the whole preceding sequence. Not correct.
D: same as option (B)
Eliminate A, B, and D
Split #2: parallel participles• although not common, a sentence, clause, or phrase may contain
both a past and a present participle such as
begun and
continuingParticiples do not indicate tense.• In this case,
begun and
continuing are both participles. Both are adjectivial modifiers of
trend • we know that "begun" is a participle because it has no subject and it anchors an absolute phrase
-- absolute phrases are described
HERE, on GMAT Club and
and in this article, HERE. • PARALLELISM
-- AND in the absolute phrase signals that parallelism may be an issue
-- what descriptive word comes before "and"?
BEGUN, which is
some kind of verb thing without a subject (i.e., a past participle). BEGUN modifies trend
BEGUN [BY the early manufacturers OF chemical products IN the nineteenth century]
-- that phrase is (1) an adjective describing trend, and (2) an addition of historical details that complement the first part of the sentence
TO MAINTAIN PARALLELISM
-- whatever comes before and after the word AND must be similar parts of speech
-- After the word
AND, therefore, we need another participle (and participial phrase)
-- the structure must be identical or nearly identical—not kinda similar
D:
begun . . . and it is continuingNOT parallel
C:
begun . . . and continuingParallel
Eliminate D.
(Options A and E, omitted above, also fail to maintain parallelism.)
The answer is