Hi,
I hope everyone is ROCKING!
I am writing to ask if people can share any NEW and Innovative responses for - "What matters most to you and why ?" - The Stanford essay question.
I am asking as I have been working with an applicant for almost over a month now, and he and I have been struggling to get something authentic that really resonates with his life. Every time I did this Stanford essay for others, I became more mature, and grew in life.
Background of my Applicant- Tech( Products). Entrepreneur ( Hasn't raised capital). Very innovative yet- Hasn't been able to sell-off the organisation or raise capital or have 100K app downloads etc. That singularity of expression is clearly missing. Strength- Comes from a very very Humble background, and is probably the only MBA Applicant in his entire family/community( first engineer as well). Would very likely shut down his business before starting the MBA as is barely Romen Profitable and not fundable yet( Struggling with team building / leadership related issues). Hasn't been able to scale because of his perfectionist nature- can't trust people easily.
Community work- Not very strong ! Yet! Has been trying to create a strong essay on Contribution/making a difference/making an impact. I have ruled them out as his Contribution Story is PURELY Plastic. Won't stick.
I am not asking you to share your essays, but if you have interesting insights on What can REALLY Matter most to us- I would be happy to spin an interesting story.
Given the basic human needs, I have tried - Admiration, Winning, Making a difference, Innovation, Challenging the Status quo, Being the first, Being Curious and a lot of these aren't going very well with the story.
Even from people who aren't applying to Stanford, or those who are assisting others as Admissions consultants, I would really love to hear more about - What are some really Great options for "What Matters most?"
Even though I know that the story matters more than the "WHAT", I am still curious what all can go into the "WHAT?"
I am getting a feeling that I have the entire thread ready, the entire story SET- YET- I am not Satisfied with the Labels he is attaching to the entire fabric of the essay.
Any thoughts/ideas/Major themes would be appreciated.
Thank You !
Jatin