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18 Aug 2020, 11:33
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Here's the version created via the use of (D).
- The adoption of using trained fighter horses, thought by some historians to have occurred around a specific era thousands of years ago, was a critical element to the flourishment of many civilizations including the Ottoman Empire.
(D) uses about the right number of words to express the meaning to be conveyed.
"The adoption" makes sense as the subject, because the adoption is something that would have occurred and that would have been an element critical to the flourishing of civilizations.
What was "the adoption" an adoption of? Using trained fighter horses. So, the use of the wording "using trained fighter horses" makes sense as well.
Finally, it makes sense to modify "the adoption of using trained fighter horses" via the use of the modifier "thought by some historians to have occurred around a specific era thousands of years ago."
So, the version created via the use of (D) is well constructed.
